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#transformersprime #transformersprimeknockout #transformersknockout
Published: 2016-05-16 03:09:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1167; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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finally got around to finishing my knockout drawing so glad i was able to finish him todayKnockout-Hasbro
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Hello! Is it fine if I give a proper review for this drawing? It's fine if you do not want to!
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its alright I'm ok with a review for itXD
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Okay, here goes:
A few things I like about this drawing is about how it portray's Knockout's personality- a narcissist. I'd also take this opportunity to comment on how well done the colors for this artwork was done! Keep up the great work~
However, there are just a few flaws I'd like to point out: first are the eyes. They're not aligned with the face, and it's a waste, seeing how much effort was put into the face, and the eyes are out of place. May I suggest that when drawing, you use a mathematical compass to draw a circle, after which you draw a circle and a cross (see what I mean here: img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spir… ) and maybe you can position eyes properly. I know that drawings eyes equally is a bit hard, but I think you might be able to pull it off~
Second is the positioning of the arms, which in the end affected the position of the lips, which is too close to the eyes! I can see a gap in the right corner of the drawing and that was a perfect place to have placed the arm, which would have made the space between the mouth and the eyes wider, bringing this piece to its full potential.
I hope this might have helped you out in one way or another! I can't wait to see what you've got in store for the next drawing~ 
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Thank you very much for the review
Ah i see now they are a bit out of proportion i always try to make sure i put focus on the eyes being symmetrical seems i didn't focus that well but I'm glad you pointed it out and thank you for the suggestion and reference
Another thing i should've put a bit more focus on i always seem put characters in a bust like shot and the gap to place the mouth is also a good place to put it.
The review definitely helped me and will help even more for my starscream picture I'm working on similar to this knockout drawing but it'll be betterXD hope you as well have a nice day
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Thank you~ <3 And you're welcome! I can't wait to see more of your art next time! Good luck! ;3
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thank you very much
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