Cyb-0-rg [2020-01-08 17:13:13 +0000 UTC]
That's some fine art.
Well, I thought the one you did in may '19 was already amazing enough and when you said you're going to redraw this one, man I was excited!
Excited to see the difference and especially how much you improved over the (hat in) time and let me tell you, it's not even a comparison.
Don't get me wrong, the older one definitely isn't a bad drawing but damn, this one.
Let me start with the colors, they look so much better when they're not pale (king). Way more expressive in my opinion and better to look at.
Forget what I told you about the perspective in the first one, because what you've done here, isn't even worth comparing. It is on top and it
looks just right! Gives the viewer a more intense feeling about the scenario, especially with Doc's expression and pose. Even without pupils,
eyebrows or a mouth (the beak doesn't count here), you can still see clearly that she looks nervous. Maybe it's just me because I've seen
enough art of her to judge that.
Going to talk a little about the Conductor too because you like that. Headshape and the grin look so much better. You could almost feel
his devious grin even when you don't look at him. His proportions look well done, everything looks more dynamic now. I could write more about
how accurate and well drawn he looks, but I didn't plan to write hours over hours. When it comes to talking about the Conductor, I'll gladly leave
the rest up to you.
Somehow you managed to make the background look kinda comfortable even without furniture. I just love how clean everything looks. Also it's a
nice detail to put some extra linearts for the lamps to make out the shape. Doesn't bother at all even when there's a lot of light. Speaking of which,
making it more decent works way better. Remember when I talked about it in the other artwork, it was a little irritating with the character lighting.
But now, it's the right amount, not too much or insufficient.
Man I can't even give you advice here because I can't find something that looks odd at all. You improved so much in that short time, what a blast!
You just keep going, no matter what while I'll start to wonder what your art will look like in the next months.
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ItsYaDoctor In reply to Cyb-0-rg [2020-01-10 13:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Cyber, I need you to know that your comments always make my entire day and often have me smiling like a dork for the rest of the week :3 I already expressed my grattitude before, but- everytime I come back I just keep smiling at this entire comment like an overjoyed potato- and I just want you to know that, thank you so much, you just make me so happy, your dorky words and puns and snatcher faces and kind remarks and feedback and the entire shebang- I'm so grateful for all of you ;w;
I'm so glad you found I improved on all these fronts and that you're enjoying my drawing so much! Especially your imput means a lot to me as you were there when I made the previous version that we both took a moment to look at in awe- and now there's this! I need you to know that I had your other long constructive and incredibly sweet comment on the previous drawing on my side as I painted this one. Your feedback helped incredibly much and I wouldn't be standing here without you nvn
Thank you so much for everything! For all the kind words, the encouragement, for everything you've said and done to me, they mean the world to me and you inspire me to improve as both an artist and a person nvn <3
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