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Irina-Ari — [WIP] Rapunzel Revisited - draft 12
Published: 2016-04-28 15:34:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1165; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Plugging away at it still!A little blog post about it: irina-ari.blogspot.com/2016/04…
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Hello there! This is one of the first critiques I'm sending, so I'm sorry If I can't convey myself exactly how I want to. I know this is WIP, but still, I'll be more than happy to write this for you! ^W^
So, I love the way you painted Rapunzel's hair, the shades are really well picked out and you've given her a more human-like look than the way she was depicted in the movie. The artwork she drew is also wonderful!
Her hair has a slight problem, it's hard to make out whether she is sitting on a pillow/cushion, or sitting on her own hair, and also her dress is tighter than the way it's depicted. And it doesn't show her boobs. But still, wonderful artwork!
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Thank you for taking the time to write a critique, I appreciate it
Ah you're right about the hair/cushion (and its so obvious, how did I not notice, haha!). I will see what I can do about that. Thank you!
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You're very welcome It has the painting quality of really old masterpieces
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