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TheBluHipsterAJ [2018-08-23 16:52:25 +0000 UTC]

AAAAHH This one's so much better than the previous one! You got his quills a lot more accurately this time around
Although still more like hair, it's much more accurate I even like how you put his small little bangs by his fore-head! It's a detail lots of people do miss.
The yellow in the green eyes is also a detail lots of people miss, and I'm glad you put that in there too!
The fluffier tail also just looks really good! And really does show the mixed breed he is supposed to be! The fluffy tail bit could most definitely come from the kangaroo mouse side of his genes while the more longer arms from the house mouse side

I also like how you also made him take off his glasses like to represent that he could still see without them, while also make his eyes kind of squinted to show like he has problems from a distance.
And the sort of girly look to him to give him more personality! Especially since some parts of him were slight slight self-inserts of me! 
The only sort of mistakes here are that his colours are very diluted, most of the areas that should be light seem to merge into the same colour if that does make sense making him seem almost like a silhouette on those with the dulled colours that look almost the same.
And some details like the dark blue tip on his tail and his cat-like pattern by the ridge of the eyes and snout are not there same with the quill and eye make-up like patterns
(the eye-makeup like pattern was stated in the "not optional" section of the reference) but you definitely did get his more human like brows on point!

His scarf is very small looking more like a pilot scarf than a more "western" scarf with the longer triangular shape going towards the chest
But everything else is there! And it looks perfect, thank you so much yet again!! And I'll be sure to try to give you something for all your troubles ;w;

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