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Illogical-Lynx — Azura Gen V

Published: 2006-10-29 08:01:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1977; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 18
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Description Firstly: I promise that the pose on this was originally going to be different from *checks* every other drawing I ever did, things just weren't working too well and it slowly reverted to 'stock-standard pose no.2'. I fail

Some time after completing his 4th variation I kinda realised that I had tried to fix a lot of stuff that really wasn't broken in the first place, and the end result wasn't as good (design wise) than some of my older designs. I've been playing with Azura's design a lot, half because I keep thinking I could do better and half because I'm slightly worried at the "Gary-Stu" factor. (I've done a lot of tests and most say he's either clean or borderline). I kept thinking I'd upload this once I had a background on it but I got stuck for ideas and decided to post it up anyways. Might do a background if I get a decent Idea for one.

Either way, this worked out quite well from an artistic point of view, I gave the fur a good bashing and I think it looks very =Venator-Somniorum -like which can only be a good thing.

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In case anyone's interested, here's his story summarised so far. Azura was inspired by the Kamigawa series of cards from MTG and I kept the species name (Nezumi) and such, but most of that will change and as yet his world is only a haze of potential ideas and the like revolving around one definite being him.

Azura was born approximately 31 summers ago to a blacksmith and his wife from a large settlement. His childhood was relatively uneventful, but Azura was always somewhat of a "pull the wings off flies" kinda kid. He expressed a keen interest in combat and started learning to fight basically as soon as he was old enough to swing a stick. At around age 15 he left home and joined the local militia, whose job was basically to raid other settlements and defend theirs from attackers.
Azura showed himself to be a ruthless and skilled soldier but was denied promotion simply because of a general lack of leadership skills.
Sometime after serving about 3 years his tribe united with several others and went to full scale war with an enemy alliance of Nezumi clans (Nezumis = roughly like the modern middle east). During the first major battle Azura took a thrown axe to the head which smashed the front of his skull and blinded him in his left eye. He owes his life to the battle helmet he was wearing that day. Having managed to crawl off the field he was discharged from the militia because of his injury which has left that side of his face scarred and disfigured. After a long recovery period he returned home to find his hometon had been badly causght up in the fighting and most of the occupants including his parents had evacuated. Their fate is still unknown to him.
In the years leading up to the present, Azura moved around a lot, living alone and selling his blades to the highest bidder sometimes as a proffesional soldier but often as a hit-man, bodygaurd or other hired thug. Throughout this time he learned from anyone willing to teach and trained and refined his fighting style into the deadly hybrid of various armed and un-armed styles it is today.
Through periods of peace Azura continued to upskill and would blackmail or mug random targets to buy anything he needed but couldn't steal. These actions as well as the paid killings of several powerful people put a sizable bounty on his head from various parties and wound him up behind bars every so often.
Although an extremely formidable opponent in close combat as well as within the range of a thrown blade, Azura is generally cautious and leaves as little as possible to chance, preferring a quick and silent knife in the dark to a fair head to head fight if he thinks the target has even a slight knowledge of armed combat. He describes himself as not being a fighter as opposed to a killer.

If there's anything else you'd like to know or think I should change in the story let me know ok?
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Comments: 33

TigieBaby [2007-03-18 08:33:48 +0000 UTC]

WOW! I realy like this drawing! its awsome! i love all the detail and everything I realy wish i could put that much detail into my work, gah!
anyway, KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!!

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to TigieBaby [2007-03-18 10:14:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!
I never used to draw humanoids much but I started out drawing tanks and planes which gave me a solid detail base for what I do now.

Thanks very much for the too! I think I'll return the favour.
Are you one of ~WolfEclipse 's friends from school? I might have seen you I just can't remember...

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TigieBaby In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-03-19 02:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome x2
and yes I am, I was the one that came up to you and told you to follow me

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to TigieBaby [2007-03-22 09:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, I remember now.
We got quite a community of us OTC students here on dA...

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TigieBaby In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-03-22 22:01:22 +0000 UTC]

hehe ^_^

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setsumei [2007-03-02 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]

wow thats good,i like the shadeing but you could make the arm a bit more musclely and the head is a bit small...but thats just my opinion

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to setsumei [2007-03-04 09:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I've never really had this character as being all that muscular, I was kinda out for the wirey sort of look as opposed to the heavy, strong look. From looking at it I probably could have made him abit more heavily built though...

Thanks for the crit though, it's always good to see what others notice in your work...

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setsumei In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-03-04 18:24:36 +0000 UTC]

yuor very welcome

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setsumei In reply to setsumei [2007-03-04 18:24:51 +0000 UTC]

srry your

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setsumei In reply to setsumei [2007-03-02 20:44:58 +0000 UTC]

arms not arm

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whitefangedwolf200 [2007-02-19 10:36:35 +0000 UTC]

He looks so AWSOME :boogies:

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to whitefangedwolf200 [2007-02-21 04:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like him, he's probably the oldest character I have right now

Thanks for the and the watch too, I think I'll give you a counter-watch!

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whitefangedwolf200 In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-02-21 07:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Heh kool and no prob the older characters can sometimes turn out to be the more liked ones

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to whitefangedwolf200 [2007-02-22 18:30:52 +0000 UTC]

xD Yeah that'd be right, I often wonder If I like this character too much lol

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whitefangedwolf200 In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-02-22 18:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Heh lol...I think that sometimes with some of my characters

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dementedpeach [2007-02-01 21:09:33 +0000 UTC]

This is really neat! I love the details you've put into it-- the fur, the weapons, the armor are all great.

It all really comes together for a nice original character. Great work! : )

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to dementedpeach [2007-02-04 08:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!
Yeah, he's gone through a lot of refining, his first form was a total Gary-Stu with an entire blacksmith's worth of swords and weaponry.
I think/hope he's through that phase!

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benmc5 [2007-01-08 10:30:09 +0000 UTC]

also very good

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to benmc5 [2007-01-09 09:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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daverave [2006-11-29 07:27:14 +0000 UTC]

omfg, this is awesome, i love it, definite fave!!!
DR

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to daverave [2006-11-30 09:25:35 +0000 UTC]


Thanks!

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Chocksy [2006-11-23 22:10:57 +0000 UTC]

nice drawing. You have talent. Just keep it up.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to Chocksy [2006-11-24 08:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, I will!

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BlastIt [2006-10-30 03:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Great, the helmet/mask is awesome, go the tail armour and spikes........spikes! something I always get carried away with.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to BlastIt [2006-10-30 08:35:04 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm finally more or less happy with the helmet. I've been busting my ass this whole time trying to make a normal human helmet fit right and getting so frustrated. Makes me wonder why I never thought of doing this sooner...

Spikes are great. They're like... spikey...
With armour like that on the tail wouldn't it just be a great thing to whip a certain someone whose name starts with A and ends in Lan across the face with?

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BlastIt In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2006-10-31 04:06:27 +0000 UTC]

damn that person who's name starts with 'A' and ends with 'lan.'

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to BlastIt [2006-10-31 04:15:21 +0000 UTC]

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a-iccara [2006-10-29 23:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Good job! Nice detail, especially in the clothing.

Now I don't know much about this character except what you've given, so I don't want to critique too much of the anatomy. Looks like a rat/draconic hybrid to me (I rather like it!) Good job on the weapons, blood spatters, and especially that jagged knife. Very nice.

However a few things leave me wondering; the neck sort of bothers me. It looks strange, too thin or something. This may partly be due to the make of the mask that gives it a thin/stubby look. I dunno. The arms look thin, I don't know if that's what you were going for or not; his left one looks a little off though in junction at elbow and shoulder. It's turned at an angle I know; I think it's the shoulder armor and that bandage around the elbow that throws it off a little. Otherwise it looks good, except for his left leg looks reealllyy thin and tiny (again, don't know if you meant to do it or not) and maybe the right leg needs a bit more muscle/thickness so it doesn't look so frail?


Again, this is just me musing :33 I'd love to see more of this character, he certainly looks extremely interesting and his story does as well. Good job! Great attention to detail and nice weapon/armor and overall design.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to a-iccara [2006-10-30 08:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, glad you like him :3
I tried so many Ideas for his right hand until I settled on that knife. I got a sheet of paper out and me and my friend just drew a whole stack of knifes then I combined all my favourite bits.

Thanks for pointing out about the legs, I have definitely made them too skinny there... I quite often have a problem with this guy's legs because he stands with his knees bent on the ball of his feet so no matter how I postion him the legs always have a nasty angle or perspective in them.
I had a good look at the neck and I think I can kinda see what you mean but not quite. If there's something wrong I'd be saying the bit where the head meets the neck maybe? But yeah I'm not too sure what...
I think I'm happy with the arm width. I'd never really had him as a big heavy muscley kinda character, more of the wirey endurance sort. I've been told off before for making the armour too thin by comparison to the actual body size so perhaps I overcompensated. The left elbow I was trying to make it look like the blood from the bandage was matted in the hair and that kinda obscured the actual shape a bit...

Massive thanks for taking the time to post such a long thoughtful comment, I really like getting critique on my work. Very much appreciated!

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a-iccara In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2006-10-30 19:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, the double-jointed knees combined with balancing on the balls of the feet makes for some DIFFICULT legs. I have problems with that, too.

And yeah, I don't mean bulk his arms up, just maybe give them a little more width or something, not necessarily muscle. I like the wirey kind of build :33. Gives him a good physique.

So is there a Mrs. Azura? ( xD )


Oh and don't worry about the pose. Sometimes simple poses work best, especially if you're wanting to show the detail of a character. Though I still have massive amounts of trouble with posing altogether...

And no problem! I can't wait to see more.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to a-iccara [2006-11-03 05:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Though I still have massive amounts of trouble with posing altogether
Iiiurgh, I totally sympathise. Often coming up with a pose I'm happy with takes me longer than the first outlines. If someone ever made a "101 easy, original poses" tutorial that would go straight to my favourites (not to mention my bookmarks) faster than a speeding bullet. In fact... *goes to search for such a tutorial*

I've never made a partener for Azura. Partly because he's such an antisocial kinda guy, any girl in a relationship with him would have to have the patience of a saint. The other reason is at my current newb level of writing ability romance = far too bloody hard.

Maybe once i've done a bit more writing and established which way is up and which is down I'll give it a shot, there's gotta be a first time for everything...

My friends at school keep saying "make him all muscley, he's too skinny" for virtually all my drawings, even if it's just a normal human marine or something. Personally I've never really liked the super heavy hulk kinda look- it always looks rather excessive. I might draw them something DBZ-esque with more muscle mass than your average T-rex just to shut them up for a while.

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SteinWill [2006-10-29 21:35:30 +0000 UTC]

OH MAN this is just so awesome cool! I love the new shape of the helmet and the mask somehow seems even more black ^^ and the shading is just gorgious! I ask myself do you even NEEd colouring with this dumstrucking amount of details? The new addition of fuzzy looking fur, looks really good too.. and this time you defently perfected the snout and head shape!

the newly added background story was interresting and quite improved from the original version... and yea, I allso like the world of Kamigava in Magic.. are you thinking of writing a story about Azura just like the Halo stories of yours? I would defently read it ^^

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to SteinWill [2006-11-03 05:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thankees!

I can't believe I never thought of this type of helmet earlier, I spent so long coming up with the old ones while this was just so much simpler and more effective.

I was quite pleased with the fur, especially his right arm. I've been wanting to give it a try for a while but couldn't find an excuse to do it

I might end up writing something for Azura eventually. If I come up with some good ideas for it, I'll definitely give it a go.

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