mettlelark [2012-04-15 01:59:37 +0000 UTC]
you missed the i in things... in the verse at the top. and teh last word in the line is unreadable. other than those tiny details, it looks great
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IDEAlize1 In reply to mettlelark [2012-04-15 02:49:38 +0000 UTC]
yea i should have made the text a little bigger probably but thanks a lot for the feedback
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