souljahsstory [2004-03-19 07:03:43 +0000 UTC]
oh wow, some of this is beautiful, love the little touches.
for me the arrows in the top right corner, lead the viewers eyes into the advert, towards the womans lips, which then makes me travel down, to that little 2004 bit with more lips! and i think this image works really well
am not too sure about the use of too much vogue text, it think text should be kept to a minimum, with just vogue fall fashion somewhere on the image, big enough to notice, but not big enough to get in the way.
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AwesomeTyler [2003-12-17 18:49:28 +0000 UTC]
This is really nice K-Dawg! I am not realy digging the random arrows but whatever there's a hot chick and that's good enough for me. Keep up the "awesome" work!
Oh and I love the random fine type near the bottom!
T-Dawg Signing out!
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bugbyte [2003-12-12 02:27:30 +0000 UTC]
Very cool! I like the layout. Everything draws your eyes to the text and it all fits well together. I like the little details like the arrows and the little inset images taken from the photo. I actually think it's pretty visually stimulating as it is- much more stuff and it could get pretty distracting. Nice job!
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