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Hypnotizing Hunter

Hunter is my little brother. That said: he's an annoying little runt with a superiority complex. He believes that no matter what I do, he will always be better. In First grade, I set a record for reading the most books of anyone in the grade ever, (200) than three years later he goes to First grade and triples my record. Or I get my first kiss from one of the Junior high's cheerleaders, he got his from the Captian of the squad his year.
"Just give it up Shaun, You'll never do better than me." Hunter would always say. Well, no more. I'm tired of his smug disrespect toward his only brother, always looking down on me, and acting intellectual because he has glasses. Now is the time I will get my revenge. It's the first day of Spring Break and mom and dad have left for the week, with the older brother in charge. I had been preparing for this day for a few months, I just wasn't expecting my time to come so soon.
I had been studying hypnosis in my room and how to use it. I disconnected part of the pull chain from my ceiling fan after I noticed that it looked like it would make a good pendulum. Now I just had to wait for a time when Hunter's guard would be down. I quietly opened my door and made my way to the living room. His back was to the hall that I emerged from watching TV. "Now's my chance," I thought to myself.
I quietly snuck up behind him and reached for the pendulum in my hoodie pocket and pulled it out. The moment I was behind him and I acted.
"What do you want b-" Hunter said before the pendulum began to sway in front of his eyes.
"That's right little brother," I said in a soft, gentle voice. "Just keep your eyes on the swaying pendulum. Follow it as it swings back and forth."
"Watch....swing...back and forth..." Hunter said dully.
"Watch the shiny crystal, and do whatever you are told," I said.
"Watch...crystal....do...whatever told," Hunter replied slowly.
"When I snap my fingers, you will instantly fall into a deep trance and do what you are told, understand?" I asked.
"Yes," Hunter said dully. A white glow had overtaken his eyes as he blankly watched the crystal and drooled.
"Good little brother," I said. "3...2...1..."*snap* Hunter fell limp on the couch.
"Now Hunter, you will no longer act all high and mighty toward your big brother, you know that I am bigger, smarter, and tougher," I said.

"Yes, Master," Hunter replied in a monotone voice. I was going to have a lot of fun this week molding him how I want him to be...

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