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hetafan123 — Bully!America x Bullied!Reader. .:You Promised:.

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Description You shuffled quickly to your next class here whispers as you passed.

“She’s fat.” One whisper reached your ear

“She’s a loner, a loser!” another line of many reached your ears.

It pained you to know that these very lines also took away your best-friend, Alfred F. Jones.
Now he was just like the rest of them, a bully, someone who wanted to hurt you, both emotionally, and physically.

Then, you saw your classroom door. “I can make it!” You though happily before being shoved out of the way by none other than, Alfred.

You landed on the ground harshly, hearing some snickers around you. Alfred already entered but his friends, Gilbert and Matthais, were pointing and laughing, only making you feel worse.

The bell rung and you got up hurriedly not wanting to be late for class again because of thes three. But that didn’t happen. Instead you got a pissed off teacher leacturing you after class.

~timeskip~

You got home ok, but your heart was crushed.

You rushed up to your bedroom, ignoring your parents’ warm welcome home, and stared sobbing.

After a few minutes of crying and you notice a picture of you and Alfred when you were younger on your nightstand.

You sniffled and picked it up remembering this moment.

---------Flashback------

“______!!!” Alfred called.

You looked over to him and smiled a cheesy smile.

“Yes, Alfred?” You asked, walking over to him.

He patted the spot next to him. “Come sit with me.” He said

You giggled like the child you were. “OK~!” You said as you plopped down next to him.

“Hey, ____.” He said suddenly.

“Hmm?” you hummed and looked at him curiously

“Promise me, that we’ll always be the best of friends.” He said looking at you with a warm smile, your cheeks turning a little pink. “With me being the hero of course!” he added quickly with his obnoxious but contagious laugh. You giggled along with him.

“I promise, Alfred.” You promised with that special little pinky of yours.

---------End of flashback---------

You laughed half-heartily as a tear slid down your cheek. The picture of you making that promise with Alfred was very special to you.

You cried even more when you realized that he broke his promise. By becoming the worst bully you ever imagined.

You sat on your bed, and wept silently a little bit more.

~~~~~~~~~~~Over to our Special little Bully~~~~~~~~~~~~

Alfred was pacing back and forth in his room running his hands through his hair.

“Why did you hurt her again?” and “You should be ashamed of yourself.” Were the thoughts that were running through his head and have been ever since he broke the promise you guys made when at age 12.

He flopped down on to his bed with a grunt. He actually liked you, no like was an understatement, he loved you. But he had a reputation to keep; he can’t be in love with the lame, unpopular girl…

Can he?

He didn't think you were lame though. He thought you were beautiful, kind, generous, and smart.

He looked up a little to see the picture of you guys making the promise that was now broken. He gave a huge sigh before drifting off to sleep.

-----back to you------

~another timeskip brought to you by flying mint bunny~

You woke up with a yawn.

Then you paused. “Did I cry myself to sleep?” you asked yourself quietly. You shook the thought off and got ready for school.

You brushed your (h/l) (h/c) hair till it was to your satisfactory. You didn't bother to put any make-up on.

You went downstairs and had a piece of toast, then walked to school since it wasn't that far away.

Once you reached school you saw a familiar face already there, and that face belonged to none other than Alfred.

You froze and stiffened up. You didn't know what to do but then you saw another person, Arthur Kirkland, his stepbrother, and also a close friend.

They were talking, so you decided to listen in.

“What’s more important? Your reputation or, her feelings?” You heard Arthur ask Alfred.

There was a silence

You stiffened up.  Were they talking about you? No they couldn't be.

“Hello there, love.” Arthur said.

You squeaked and jumped a tiny but, turning slowly to face the two.

“How long have you been there?” he asked

“I just got here.” You lied softly, avoiding his gaze.

“But I do have a question for Alfred.” You stated, a little more confident.

Alfred looked at you with a shocked glare. “What is it, dude?” he asked coldly.

“what happened to our promise?” you asked, trying to keep your eye contact.

SMACK!

Your eyes went wide and tears pricked the edges of your eyes. A visible slap mark forming “You’re no hero…” you mumbled. Then, you turned around and started running away from the two of them.

‘You’re no hero.’ Those words hit Alfred like a punch in the face, especially since it was coming from you.

That’s when he decided what was more important.

You were the most important thing in his life.

“______, wait!” he called.

You only ran faster, but Alfred caught up to you quickly and caught your wrists.

“Let me go!” you cried, struggling out of his grip.

“No, not again.” He mumbled to you wiping a stray tear off of your face.

You looked up at him with red, puffy, confused, and sad eyes. “What?” you asked quietly

“I will never let you go again.” He said pressing his lips against yours before you could say anything. You stiffened a little, but melted all the same.

He pulled away looking into your (e/c) eyes and pushed back a strand of your hair. “Look, _____. I know I betrayed you, hurt you, and crushed you, but I did it all for popularity, I never really meant it, and, I’m sorry. All I ask is for another chance. Not just as a friends, but as something more.” He said gripping your hands tightly.

You chuckled and happy tears came dripping off your face.

“Yes. Yes I would love that.” You said, giving a nice long bear hug. “Just promise me this.”

He looked at you curiously.

“Promise me you will never leave my side again.” You mumbled.

He smiled a soft warm smile.  “I promise.” He said

You guys lived the rest of your lives happily, never breaking that promise.
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Comments: 590

Outdownunder [2019-01-25 00:32:04 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean, "hopefully emotional story"?
Thx to u I am bawling my potato face out and my sister is looking at me like "why am i rwlated 2 tgis potat" LOL srsly tho, you're amazing

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Cricketina [2018-05-12 16:33:03 +0000 UTC]

BItch! You just frikin slapped me!!
What do YOU think?
It's gonna take a long time for you to buttery your way back into this heart, arshlock!

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Outdownunder In reply to Cricketina [2019-01-25 00:33:31 +0000 UTC]

LOL if this actually happened to me, I would have no heart left for him to "buttery his way in" XD

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Cricketina In reply to Outdownunder [2019-01-26 06:30:16 +0000 UTC]

MMhmm

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Saroona0410 [2018-01-02 13:41:22 +0000 UTC]

KAWAIIIII

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Saroona0410 In reply to Saroona0410 [2018-01-02 13:41:54 +0000 UTC]

But in reality, I would've kicked his ass before forgiving him

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Outdownunder In reply to Saroona0410 [2019-01-25 00:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Same,  LOL actually, would could this little potato do to the great and almighty Alfred Jones, the hero?

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husuivermilion [2017-12-23 07:10:58 +0000 UTC]

IM STILL FUCKING PISSED ABOU THE ENDING I WOULDA SMACKED THAT BITCHS FACE AND STARTED SCREAMING I WILL SURVIVE WHILE STRUTTING AWAY CUZ U FUCKING HIT ME YOU BITCH YOU THINK ILL FORGIVE YOU SO FUCKING EASILY!!?!?! 

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Saroona0410 In reply to husuivermilion [2018-01-02 13:41:33 +0000 UTC]

IKR BUT WHATEVER

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Naruko-Nohara [2017-08-22 20:54:39 +0000 UTC]

encreible sempài

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SachikoNeko [2017-06-20 22:52:13 +0000 UTC]

I expected a bad ending, because if it was me, I can't forgive him so quick. I would have hit him.

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MacNCheese2 In reply to SachikoNeko [2017-06-23 18:53:31 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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espegirl12 [2017-04-02 20:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Bruh why would you just forgive him like that wth...

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GeekyG555 [2016-11-07 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Back stabbing mother foker! No way in hell would I just kiss and make up with that bastard, wtf!!!!

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Jazminedraws88 In reply to GeekyG555 [2017-03-31 18:31:00 +0000 UTC]

same

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SarahLovesHetalia [2016-10-08 17:35:29 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But if someone hit me, them bitches are going down with my damn scissors and my fucking older brothers with their hunting knifes and my friend Russia!!!!!!! With his magical pipe of pain!!!!!  

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Outdownunder In reply to SarahLovesHetalia [2019-01-25 00:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Akashi Seijuro is gonna have 2 go and do da scissors job up 4 meh, this potat can't do nothin lol

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littlegayboi In reply to SarahLovesHetalia [2017-01-04 19:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Scale of horror:

Thunder storm

Emil

Lukas

And at the scariest ivan

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MeridaHofferson [2016-08-28 06:36:40 +0000 UTC]

OMYGOSH THE FLYING MINT BUNNY FANDOM IS EVERYWHERE!!! but seriously, if Alfred slapped me, he'd be dead after a second. NO ONE SLAPS ME AND LEAVES WITHOUT A CUT OR BRUISE!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-08 22:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Say that you lied after that.
Leave a bruse and scar on his soul.

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-12 23:10:32 +0000 UTC]

That sounds better! burn his soul!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-13 23:26:10 +0000 UTC]

We all know that we could get over him if he dies.
As long as the actual country isn't affected.
I LIVE IN AMURICANO.

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-16 01:09:35 +0000 UTC]

XD oh no! Let's hope it doesn't burn then! That'd be harsh!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-16 21:42:12 +0000 UTC]

*Washington (Not DC) is suddenly on fire*
Welp.
Time to move!
(I do not live in Washington)

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-17 17:23:59 +0000 UTC]

XD oh shit!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-18 22:48:48 +0000 UTC]

America:
AAAHHHH!
MY SHOULDER'S ON FIRE!!!

England or something: HERE!!!
*Throws water on America's entire half*

*half the state is suddenly drowned in water from the sky*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-19 02:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Omygod XD poor idiotic America!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-19 03:57:40 +0000 UTC]

People in the west part of America: HELP! WE'RE DROWNING FROM MAGIC WATER FROM THE SKY! JESUS, WHY ARE YOU SO MEAN?!

Me: *On a plane to Japan*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-19 06:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Wise choice, wise choice...

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-19 12:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Hetalia!Japan: *Dodging all of the attacks while reading manga* Please do not disrupt our country.

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-19 13:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh...

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-22 01:11:55 +0000 UTC]

TO ENGLAND!!!!

England: *hugging Italy*

Me:*Sees every English person hugging an Italian.*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-22 23:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Yup.
*when italy talks about germany*
Me:GERITA!!! I SHIP IT.

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-23 10:57:42 +0000 UTC]

SEBASTIAN! 
STOP HUGGING THAT ITALIAN!

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-24 03:37:30 +0000 UTC]

WTF? Sebastian?! XD

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-24 20:19:52 +0000 UTC]

*Stares at Ciel*

NOT YOU TOO!!!!

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-24 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]

OH NO!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-25 01:33:50 +0000 UTC]

*Scared Asian noises*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-25 03:14:51 +0000 UTC]

*Scared Italian noises*
(Lol XD)

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-25 06:38:12 +0000 UTC]

*Scared human noises*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-25 18:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Wait. How did this conversation even start? 0-0

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-27 08:48:01 +0000 UTC]

*Confused cat noises*

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MeridaHofferson In reply to JustAChildAtHeart [2016-09-27 11:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Wait. I gotta go, my iPhone's shutting down! See you later!

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JustAChildAtHeart In reply to MeridaHofferson [2016-09-28 12:34:31 +0000 UTC]

*Spaceship landing noises or something*

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Amari-chanGrossman [2016-08-02 21:27:30 +0000 UTC]

The feels

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Russia-Chan4117 [2016-06-27 22:39:29 +0000 UTC]

If Alfred smacked me id beat his punk arse then ditch him and get together with Mathew!!! Sorry Writer-San the ending was a little to sappy for me personal taste bit. I still loved !!!!!.......a lot thought Alfred is probably in a world of pain because of my pipe I still loved it!!

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Lucina-Nightshade In reply to Russia-Chan4117 [2016-09-24 04:54:06 +0000 UTC]

yep i would do the same thing go to mathew

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Russia-Chan4117 In reply to Lucina-Nightshade [2016-09-28 19:29:14 +0000 UTC]

See fab minds tink a like and mattie is better looking 

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Lucina-Nightshade In reply to Russia-Chan4117 [2016-09-28 23:40:42 +0000 UTC]

i agree

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Russia-Chan4117 In reply to Lucina-Nightshade [2016-09-29 20:59:55 +0000 UTC]

😎

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