Comments: 6
Jamaya [2007-11-13 14:24:32 +0000 UTC]
A very deep poem and background, I really like it!
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DocTekla [2006-12-10 20:31:55 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! So... still not over the pneumonia huh?
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hawkthing In reply to DocTekla [2006-12-11 06:28:29 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I'm over it. I stuck the glass through my hand the day after I was off of the anti-biotics :/
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Sardaug [2006-12-09 00:02:52 +0000 UTC]
A very nice feeling of increased tempo in the second stanza, returning to a more languid pace at the end.
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Dubothe [2006-12-08 23:40:01 +0000 UTC]
<3
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