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Published: 2017-03-21 03:02:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 809; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 4
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* Special forces officer Neo- assigned with preliminary scouting of the Earth's newly emerged "primordial hell chasm." Assisted by a sizable platoon of troops.* In Doing so Officer Neo received an unprecedented physical assault from an unknown biological assailant- resulting in both arms and legs being completely dismembered. Following blunt trauma to her torso and spine. Despite critical condition she survived.
* The assailant in question had "skin made of armor" that was not affected by any form of returned fire. Assailant eventually retreated back into the chasm after sustaining damage from reinforcements.
* Before reinforcements arrived the creature was described as being able to "tear through armed troops like tissue paper" With a great excess of limbs as well as a gaping mouth full of teeth. It moved in a strange lunging motion using all of it's appendages at once. It's two primary pectoral arms were larger than the others. As described by Neo they were the very arms that crippled her.
* Neo has gone under a cybernetic-replacement surgery that took place a few weeks after the attack. She vividly described how she wanted a body that could "tear every limb from that beast's carapace."
* Neo and her recovering platoon have been permitted to return to the site of the attack, Neo continues to investigate the site alone. However the mysterious creature that appeared from the chasm hasn't been seen since.
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First off I like the little story you’ve added to this character. Obviously if something rips off your arms, make yourself able to combat the very thing so you can do the same to it- so to speak. The design is very human looking, and you went for that design by incorporating the pistons into the calves and such. Almost techno organic you could say. I do like how you opted to have human feet (similar to Robocop (the original)), and how they possess human like hands, rather than looking like a human clad in robotic armor. The giant armored hands look like a nice touch as well. To accommodate that large arm/shoulder width those 3rd and 4th arms need, the hips seem to be widened in order to be able to support that. I like how you took the time to do that.
Overall there isn’t much to go over really. The hand with the cigarette seems to be facing the wrong way. It looks as if the cigarette is pointing down into their inner knuckle, rather than being held outwards. Hands are hard, so there’s no need to go ballistic over it. Judging from the angle, the palm would be facing us, or the side of the hand and pinkie finger would be facing us. The cigarette would be pointing towards or away. Also try giving a much more dramatic color to the cigarette smoke to help it pop out, and maybe a red dot to show the end of where the cigarette is at.
I do like the shading on this, it’s very complicate but you pulled it off the best as you can, especially with such a very complex and intricate design you’ve got going on. The small shines on the metal help make it look metal, and the giant scar over the person’s face is rather nice, adds to the “battle damage” a person might get from having a rough and tough fight with a monster- not to mention the cigarette also adds to that sort of “tough” look one might get after surviving a battle with a strange beast.
Overall you’ve done a good job at helping give your character personality and attitude, as well as make an interesting picture. Great job, and keep up the good work. 
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thank you! also that's not a scar on her face she actually has vilitigo .w.
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Design wise, this is pretty good. It looks very original and it looks as if it can stand out as its own thing. Perhaps there might be a few designs similar to it like others, but so far I haven't seen any, so that alone makes this very unique on its own. The color of choice really brings out the sort of law enforcement vibe to it. Despite her being very heavily equipped, you can easily tell that she's a sort of police officer. Now, you've done a very good job with lighting and shadows to bring dimension to the image. However, I would suggest adding some shading to the image itself. Perhaps other color tints to really help make the image come to life.
Overall, this is a fantastic piece. The design is pretty good and striking, making it look like a very original of its own. The style also seems to be unique in itself, making it look as if this image really belongs to you alone. Colors are good, you've done a splendid job with the shadows and lighting. I would suggest adding a bit more shades to really make it pop out. Still, great work! Keep it up!
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thank you!! ;w;
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when your a cyborg cop ya gotta be swole.
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she probably listens to that daily XD
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=_KxMND…
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being? she's human lol
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I still use that word to describe many types of living things so I don't get a mix up on what they are
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