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Published: 2009-07-24 23:22:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2244; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 92
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Description My first emote!

Instead of going with some dumb choppy animation like most do on their first try, I decided to step back into familiar territory with static pixel art.

I think this is the first image in my gallery to have a moral. It tells you to reach for the stars. Dream big. And even though sometimes you can't pull it off, trying your darndest is fine, nine times out of ten. For instance, a year and a half ago I would've never dreamed that I would be doing emotes-even static ones. And here's the result.

EDIT: As per `CookiemagiK 's critique below, I changed the emote from green to blue and added a realistic shine. Looks a lot better now.
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ChandlerJanse [2009-07-25 16:39:00 +0000 UTC]

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First off for your very first emoticon it is very lovely. The stars are nice however i do not think that should come so far down. Also great job on the moon. As well as this try fixing the colors on the person and maybe try to make it look like he is jumping if you were to animate it. So you kind of get the concept "Jumping for the stars" or "Reaching for the stars" Overall you did a very good job seeing as it was a first for you. My first was quite horrible and pixel(y) like you said. Just wanted to say that you should continue making more like these. Would love to see a version 2,3,4 for this one. Keep up the good work!

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GyroxOpex In reply to ChandlerJanse [2009-07-25 17:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'll take that into consideration.

I didn't think that I did a very good job adding depth to the grass, so I put some extra stars down there to try and make the sky look more infinite. As for newer versions, `CookiemagiK said it'd be better if I added a shine to the emote and re-colored it to provide better differentiation from the grass. So yes, there will most likely be a v2, but I'll probably just replace this one with a different, better one.

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CookiemagiK [2009-07-25 08:19:13 +0000 UTC]

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That's a lovely idea and very well depicted! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap" />

The stars were the first things that caught my attention when I looked at this. Nice touch on using different shades of white to give the stars different distances. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="35" height="31" alt="" title="#1" />

I only feel that the est of the piece is a bit hard to see because everything is so dark. Of course since it's night time it will have to be dark e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle" /> but since the moon looks so bright I think you should brighten up the rest of the piece a tiny bit as well. Maybe you can try having some light from the moon hit the right side of the emote ^^ Also having the emote be a different color than green would help, since the grass is already that color.

Other than that it's a very nice first emote!
Good job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww" />a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/h/t… " alt=" " title="thumbplz"/>

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mankoneko In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-07-26 06:35:08 +0000 UTC]

i agree about the colour issue. on the screen i have got now all i see is a black box with one white corner.

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CookiemagiK In reply to mankoneko [2009-07-26 07:40:50 +0000 UTC]

XD

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GyroxOpex In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-07-25 14:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks! I'll fix it up later.

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CookiemagiK In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-25 15:31:50 +0000 UTC]

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GyroxOpex In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-07-26 03:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Changed it to blue and added a shine, just like you wanted.

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CookiemagiK In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-26 07:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Excellent Looks better now ^___^

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GyroxOpex In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-07-26 13:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Agreed.

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DragonFlame2012 [2009-11-20 20:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice emote man. Good message too.

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GyroxOpex In reply to DragonFlame2012 [2009-11-20 21:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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fucduck [2009-08-07 20:20:04 +0000 UTC]

make it even more bright

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GyroxOpex In reply to fucduck [2009-08-07 21:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'll do that later, but thanks for the advice.

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thisolddeviantart [2009-07-31 11:02:34 +0000 UTC]

hey, can I use this as an avatar?

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GyroxOpex In reply to thisolddeviantart [2009-07-31 13:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Um, sure, just be sure to credit me and link back here.

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thisolddeviantart In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-31 13:18:59 +0000 UTC]

sweet, thanks

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GyroxOpex In reply to thisolddeviantart [2009-07-31 13:31:27 +0000 UTC]

NP.

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thisolddeviantart In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-31 13:35:10 +0000 UTC]

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Fallen-Moonlight [2009-07-27 21:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work,I really like how it turned out but since the moon look so bright maybe you should brighten things up just a little because it's pretty,but quite hard to see

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GyroxOpex In reply to Fallen-Moonlight [2009-07-28 01:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. I'll upload another one soon.

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Fallen-Moonlight In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-28 02:12:11 +0000 UTC]

Weeeee~!

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admx [2009-07-25 13:46:09 +0000 UTC]

great! hope to see more of your emote art

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GyroxOpex In reply to admx [2009-07-25 14:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and I hope to do more.

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xPaintball [2009-07-25 10:45:47 +0000 UTC]

...boring?

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GyroxOpex In reply to xPaintball [2009-07-25 13:59:38 +0000 UTC]

My first one though.

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CookiemagiK [2009-07-25 08:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Yay!
Hope you will be making more!

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GyroxOpex In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-07-25 13:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Cookie! I hope to make some animated ones sometime in the future, but to make them on your level would take about 20 centuries.

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The-Celestial-Dragon [2009-07-24 23:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work Gyro!

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GyroxOpex In reply to The-Celestial-Dragon [2009-07-24 23:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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The-Celestial-Dragon In reply to GyroxOpex [2009-07-24 23:34:28 +0000 UTC]

NP!

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