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Les quiero agradecer por darme su valiosa opinión a: lauraypablo y KrypteriaHG / I want to thank for giving me her valuable opinion to: lauraypablo KrypteriaHG .
No es lo que suelo subir, pero quiero subir cosas variadas, cosas que me gusten o cosas nuevas y espero que les guste. / It is not what I usually get, but want to upload different things, things that I like,or new things and hope you like it.
STOCK:
Model: Ruins 4
Petal Rain: Petal Rain 02
Background: Mountains and Path premade BG II
Background II: Painted Background Night 1
Pozo: Puits fleuri
Moon: Moon II
Butterfly I: The stock was deleted.
Butterfly II: The stock was deleted.
Butterfly III: The stock was deleted.
Wooden Bench: Wooden Bench PNG..
Stone: Stone2 by cindysart-stock
Antique Wheel: antique spinning wheel PNG
3D Pebbles: 3D Pebbles
Branches: Branches II PNG
Frame: The stock was deleted.
Lo demás hecho por mi. / Else made by me.
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In this piece the soft, wistful colours and the emotions- both a touch of melancholy and nostalgia makes it a very charming creation.
Though not being a most original concept, it has a strong vision and impact.
You've to work on the technical aspect of it, for example the composition. Beginning with which, I must say your cut out needs to be worked on- here the model's outline looks too sharp and I can still see some parts of the original background.
Then coming to her wings, they look quite small and not properly blended within her hair. The left one looks too dark and so does her left hand as well- saturated and dark.
You've a basic idea of where the lighting and the shadows must be painted but you need to be careful on it's execution.
The dress lacks volume, with the lighting and shadows missing. Although I loved the perspective and dynamism of your scene, however I found your alignment of the focus not well balanced.
The mountains on the further back to the left side has been blurred out of focus, however the one in front is still in focus- that should be blurred as well.
I felt if you could've lessened the shadows from the left part of the scene, it would give off a more balanced ambiance.
Being an emotional piece, I can't get the meaning behind placing a spinning wheel in the scene?
To me it looks totally out of place and so does the well in the distance amidst the mist.
Adding butterflies is a delicate touch to the whole piece although the one in the foreground on the right side looks a bit distracting being too big and takes the attention away from the girl. You could've made it smaller or chosen another butterfly with a different angle. And also maybe you could've brought the left one more into focus by moving it out of the shadows.
The branches and petals put on a blurred focus really gives a sweet and delicate feel to this piece. Just try to understand the fundamentals of applying depth of field in your works.
Here you could've moved the mountains into further distance, now they look too near and the overall scene seems very congested.
And also made the model slightly smaller, now it looks as if she is popping out of the frame.
But I really loved the idea of framing this art, like that it centers all your attention towards the main scene. Other than all this, I feel this is a very beautiful art. Your choice of colours and details are really complementing the mood and the ambiance of this piece also looks great.
Thank you for reading this, I hope you enjoyed my critique!
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Thank you so much!!
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Primero que nada, felicitaciones por haber hecho esta hermosa manipulación aunque no sea el estilo que sueles hacer. Creo que siempre es bueno intentar crear otras cosas porque eso hace que nos desafiemos a nosotros mismos y probablemente descubramos un nuevo talento. Y eso es lo que te sucedió a ti! Realmente tienes talento para esto, recomiendo que sigas practicando y llegarás lejos e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Sobre el sentimiento que trasmite; el título hace pensar sobre la soledad y de hecho, la modelo cree estar sola. Pero en la imágen, se nos da un toque esperanzador, significando que nunca estamos solos (por ejemplo, en la imágen las mariposas, la naturaleza, etc están ahí).
Bueno, respecto a la técnica; me encantó la selección de colores y la composición general de la imagen. También me gustó como usaste la iluminación y desenfocaste las partes más cercanas para dar dimensión.
Sigue practicando y de a poco vas a ir aprendiendo nuevas técnicas y mejorando aún más.
Saludos! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Muchísimas gracias.
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beautiful dreamy artwork! love also the composition! real beauty
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Thank you so much! It means a lot!
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Thank you so much! My pleasure.
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Oh!! Te quedó precioso amigo mío<3
Me encantó la armonía de los colores, perfección!
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¡Amiga! Muchísimas gracias, me alegra este comentario!
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