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Description Start: While Stan was hanging out, driving his cruiser motorcycle next to the park, he passed by its
entrance where he found a box covered by stickers, mail labels and tapes, it was left on the surface of
the short stone wall.________________________________________________________________
he left his motorcycle to take a look a it, and it had the name and address of  his acquaintance Nikos, So Stan took the box to his motorcycle's trunk, and changed his destination to Nikos's home.
despite the road being empty, Stan drove slowly, being careful with the delivery he had since it had
"fragile" stickers.
so, Nikos is an artist and graphic designer, with disturbing history.
he worked with Stan and Kanzas to make album covers and the band logo, Nikos hated Stan for his overall anger, but both still friends because they understood each other, both of them had these extraordinary yet limited abilities, and they learned to deal with it.
about Nikos's ability, he can prints a whole file about person's history and details, including their secrets and lies, just by having their fingerprints, knowing that much of details about people made them afraid of him, also causing Nikos Troubles.
Stan took a boring long journey to deliver the box, he went to road leading to the mountains, there where Nikos lived, he isolated himself in a large building his father left him, it was his studio and
home.
there wasn't any vehicles in the road, it was foggy and silent, never felt like summer.
the place was so silent that Stan Started to hear voices.
that box was an odd one, having weird commands as "don't take photos" "must keep in a bag", another one was "DONT LOOK BACK!".
Stan began to  overthink about that one command  and it's purpose,  he knew there was a purpose of it, maybe there was a person following him, and they don't want him to see them?
with the overthinking, the voices in his head increased, telling him to look back, then smoke began to come from behind him, it's as if something forcing him to turn around.
he kept cool about it all.
he kept driving until he reached 3/4 of the way to his destination, he was already in magic man's Forest.
the trees had long branches, he heard  sound of the right bag in his cruiser tearing apart.
but there 's nothing happening when he turned around to check on it.
the right bag was shaking , where the box was in, Stan thought to himself that the box was for sure something dangerous, he slowed down to check on it.
but an arm came out and picked his hand, pulling him from his seat.
"I TOLD YOU DON'T LOOK BACK" said a voice coming out from the box, it appeared to be a young man with long black hair, narrow wide sunglasses, and leather gloves, he had a thin arm, yet so strong it mashed Stan's wrist.__________________
another arm came from the other bag, it reached Stan's neck, but couldn't pull him.
"what's the matter with you? are you planning to kill both of us" said Stan
"how come you come out of this box, it doesn't even fit an arm?"
"you don't understand, that's not a box, it's just my disguise" said the man
"why do you want to reach Nikos, are you a foe of him"
"i'm not planning to reach Nikos -whoever he is-, i was searching foe You Konstantinos, i'm paid to end your life"
the man talking to Stan wasn't known for an identity in the city, but he was reported to steal people
in several occasions, he's believed to be a salesman.
he's able to take disguise of any object, most time wallets of mail material.
he takes the attention of people who pick him by stupid commands, that man creates circumstances
making people break that commands, then that's when he get his strength, he manipulates people to
make them as weak as people, he gets more strength with confidence and ego.
that man doesn't have name, so we'll call him DLB (Don't Look Back)
how did Stan dealt with him?
Stan was confused about everything going on, he was not able to focus on driving, the road was
covered in fog, and a truck appeared all of a sudden in front of him.
"Look at me! Kon, you know you will crash eventually, that road will not go straight forever"
"what 's the matter, do something, you know you had to do something"
"why don't you just shut the fuck up" said Stan
"how unfortunate, i thought you were a strong target, you're just a 16 years old with an ugly
hairstyle and outfit, i think i'll just just and leave you to slide in the next turn"
how did he beat him?
"what did you just said?" said Stan
DLB: "what's the matter, are you going to show me your real power"
Stan: "..."
DLB: "i bet you're going to beat me"
Stan: "just SHUT! i'll make you get away, i'll give you a challenge"
DLB: "bring it"
Stan: "..."
DLB:"..."
       "and, what is it?"
Stan turned back to get beck and casually drive.
DLB: "HEY, TALK"
DLB's hand slipped of Stan, he got weaker, Stan's attention and pressure decreased as he get back
to driving, the fear that gave DLB strength is gone.
"talk to me you, face me with your long ugly nose, and hideous hairstyle, i'm repeating, i don't have
time with people like you trying to compete me, i've got no time to waste"
DLB got Stan again from his hair, he was trying to get his head closer to snap his neck.
Stan finally moved, he used his other hand and got his Revolver.
Revolver's neck stretched all the way inside DLB's arm, then stopped the motorcycle.
Stan: "now, what did you say earlier about my outfit"
DLB: "..."
Stan: "WHAT DID YOU SAY EARLIER ABOUT MY OUTFIT AND FACE?! HIDEOS YOU SAID? I'M GONNA MAKE YOUR FACE JUST LIKE MINE"
Stan snapped out, he was holding his anger, and focusing on it only, making his fear, which strengthened DLB go away, now DLB is weak.
Stan got from his seat, and kicked DLB on his face, launching the bag 6 meters away, he got Revolver and launched cassettes on him, they were exploding on DLB just like fireworks, He relieved all his anger on him, and hit him with the guitar on the head as much as he could
Stan then took one of his revolver's cassettes, he imprisoned DLB in the tape, turning him to a sound clip, a song, Stan didn't plan to listen to it,  so kept it in the trunk.
sometimes, Stan's friends keep hearing screams coming from his cruiser.
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this is the first time i write, this is my first short story, it's bad.
but i'll try to get better.
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