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Morichalion [2013-07-04 04:16:36 +0000 UTC]

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Doomsday still needs some detail work. The bone armor on his shoulders look more lock a rock than bone, due to the way the textures play over it. His skin is very clay-like, not fleshy at all.

I don't think Supergirl should be as muscled up as she is now. While it's true that a stronger character will have larger muscles, there's a certain point where it just doesn't seem attractive anymore. Skin material should be tweaked to be less hard, maybe. Her cape should have a texture on it, to more closely simulate the look of some kind of fabric.

Beyond that, the characters are both very clean. There's no injuries on either character. There's nothing to indicate how long they've been fighting. Add some scratches, bruising, or some other indication of injury.

The composition is painfully obvious, it is far too clear that the character models were slapped on top of the background.

Also, next time please specify which 3d package you used to create the scene, and rendering engine used, as well. More information might get you reviewers who can give advice specific to your workflow.

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up2nogd1 [2013-07-07 17:26:45 +0000 UTC]

I like the concept and am glad you got a scene with Supergirl flexing up her biceps! It would be cool to see her destroying Doomsday and flexing up her biceps even bigger (but maybe that's just me).

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