Comments: 7
AngelicAdonis [2009-05-24 18:48:39 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done!
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avroillusion [2009-05-15 18:00:32 +0000 UTC]
Smooth lines and organic, circular forms give the feeling of movement (especially the hair) and are well composed. The choice of a monochrome colour scheme give it a sense of gravity, and more attention can be paid to the lighting and value of the picture.
I feel there is no real awkwardness in the piece since the lines flow together so well. The cartoon-like proportions work well to give her a sense of power due to the emphasis on her shoulders, chest and thighs. However, I personally think the bent arm's inner elbow should be more pronounced. Anyway, it's a well put together, visually pleasing piece.
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PixelArtPaintings [2009-05-13 14:30:44 +0000 UTC]
I don't have a subscription so I can't write a "real" critique but here ya go:
The pose is extremely awkward, specifically her feet being turned inward. Almost looks like her foot is broken.
Proportions are extremely stylized, don't know if I like it or not. I do love the arm cannon, though.
The suit reminds me a lot of Prime 2's Light Suit -- kinda like you mixed the Varia with the Light and this would be the result.
Cool idea, though!
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big-trs [2009-05-11 19:18:13 +0000 UTC]
i wish you would do stuff like this more often!
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LordOfPastries [2009-05-11 17:14:15 +0000 UTC]
I am reminded lovingly of Trout Fish Yogurt.
ffffyeah
Really great posture, she really looks like she's ready for action!
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Lee-nus [2009-05-11 14:56:57 +0000 UTC]
very cool, i commend you on doing this! complicated suit... o.O
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