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Ta daaa! Page 2!

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So page 2 was really fun! I had a hard time making it look extremely grungy, but when I added the rain, it just clicked! Woot! Also, the rain in the first two panels was tricky, 'cause I couldn't find a tut on it, so I played around with it and am quite happy with the outcome! Still a few things I can work on, but overall I'm pleased with this.

Two final things I want to touch on:

1) The page I used to make this was in Japanese, so the SFX were in Japanese. I sent the page to my friend, ~Capt-BA and she kindly translated it. Of course, after that, I had to translate it from Englishese to English. The sound affect "Chk" is pretty much for the sound of the shovel when Ed's digging. Capt-BA told me in Japanese, it's pronounced "za", so I had to do some fine-tuning to it and take a little poetic license and "chk" was the first thing that came to mind when I thought about what a shovel might sound like.

2) I don't make a point of knowing was color barf is, so I just chose the most outrageous color I could think of... I think Ed better get it checked up, that doesn't look healthy, even by his standards. Unless all he drinks is carrot juice... XD

Edit: *facepalm Forgot to mention again that this is an actual scene in the FMA manga. I borrowed the lineart (created by Hiromu Arakawa, the author/artist) and colored it, then took the lineart out. So the expressions, angles, awesomeness, don't belong to me, just the colors! Sorry for forgetting!!

Edward Elric, Pinako Rockbell, Fullmetal Alchemist (c) Hiromu Arakawa and Square Enix

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Ta daaa! Page 2!

THIS IS READ RIGHT TO LEFT!

BEGINNING: [link]

PREVIOUS: [link]

NEXT: Unavailable

So page 2 was really fun! I had a hard time making it look extremely grungy, but when I added the rain, it just clicked! Woot! Also, the rain in the first two panels was tricky, 'cause I couldn't find a tut on it, so I played around with it and am quite happy with the outcome! Still a few things I can work on, but overall I'm pleased with this.

Two final things I want to touch on:

1) The page I used to make this was in Japanese, so the SFX were in Japanese. I sent the page to my friend, ~Capt-BA and she kindly translated it. Of course, after that, I had to translate it from Englishese to English. The sound affect "Chk" is pretty much for the sound of the shovel when Ed's digging. Capt-BA told me in Japanese, it's pronounced "za", so I had to do some fine-tuning to it and take a little poetic license and "chk" was the first thing that came to mind when I thought about what a shovel might sound like.

2) I don't make a point of knowing was color barf is, so I just chose the most outrageous color I could think of... I think Ed better get it checked up, that doesn't look healthy, even by his standards. Unless all he drinks is carrot juice... XD

Edit: *facepalm Forgot to mention again that this is an actual scene in the FMA manga. I borrowed the lineart (created by Hiromu Arakawa, the author/artist) and colored it, then took the lineart out. So the expressions, angles, awesomeness, don't belong to me, just the colors! Sorry for forgetting!!

Edward Elric, Pinako Rockbell, Fullmetal Alchemist (c) Hiromu Arakawa and Square Enix