Comments: 26
AmeerAshourDraws [2019-06-02 17:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I'm from ProjectComment . I've stumbled into your deviation and I want to give my critique!
The overall image looks good to me, you've done an amazing job in sketching Garfield in the movie, and he kinda looks like exactly like in the movie. I'm actually really impressed with that!
The colors look like exactly what Garfield has: Orange and Brown, and I can't forget about his anatomy, he looks EXACTLY like a cat, which is something I'm really impressed with! Also, you made a really great job with Garfield's face, his eyes, his mouth and his head shape really stand out in a very outstanding way. Also, I love the way he's eating the doughnut.
There's one thing I don't like about the image which is the shading. I sometimes find the shading to be something like everywhere at random parts of Garfield's body, and I can't tell exactly where the light source is, I don't know if it's like behind Garfield's head or in front of him. Here's my advice to fix this: think about where the source of light is and draw where the light should emit and where it should hit his body, then after coloring the body normally, use a darker color (by changing the hue a bit first and then the luminousty) amd color the parts where the light doesn't hit the body. I hope this helps you in future deviations.
And, to conclude things, my final review of this is an 8.5 out of 10. The drawing itself is amzing and cool, and the shape of Garfield's body is so fitting. It's just the shading that needs to be improved. I hope my advice can help you in future deviations and I hope to see more from you!
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oronk [2019-05-12 17:11:12 +0000 UTC]
This drawing is perfect, very beautiful.
I liked the details of the hair and the pinutra, they were incredible !!
Congratulations!!
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Gequibren In reply to oronk [2019-05-13 18:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ! ^o^
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RWQFSFASXC395248 [2019-04-18 19:27:10 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I'm from www.deviantart.com/projectcomm…
So let's start with the very first thing I noticed about this piece, the fur. Wow, this is extremely well done. I know that fur is a tricky thing to draw with any sense of realism put into it, but the technique used here really managed to capture the furry texture without making it look like a scribbly mess. The shading on the bottom is also a really nice detail. In fact, I'd say this looks more realistic than the model used in the movies.
The eyes are also amazing. I don't know how you managed to give them that smooth and glossy look without it being jarring to the rest of the picture, but you did.
The sprinkles on the doughnut are also very well done. Like the rest of the picture, its texture is perfect and it looks really nice.
However, I did notice some odd coloring issues. Firstly, his nose and inner ears look like a very deep shade of purple instead of the light pink color that garfield usually has and it's pretty distracting and, to be honest, it was the second thing I noticed after I saw the fur. Was this something that happened during the editing?
Also, apart from his face, the stripes are not visible. I don't know if this was a stylistic choice or not, but maybe you should have gone for his original design a bit more. The original version had black stripes instead of the dark orange stripes this version has, so those might have shown up better in here.
Overall, this is a really great piece with very well done drawing techniques and stunning texturing. Just a couple of odd coloring choices that I noticed. You did a great job here and I hope to see more from you in the future!
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LadyMountainDewDTK [2019-04-02 13:35:31 +0000 UTC]
Hi there. Nice work on Garfield,right there. It look so real.
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max-boy-1991 [2019-04-01 15:45:13 +0000 UTC]
You did a good job on the fur, nice colors too!
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tcr11050 [2018-05-06 22:18:03 +0000 UTC]
Though the movie may not have got the best reception, I did remember watching a little bit of it(The first half I think, because I was testing a new Blu-ray player), and at best it was OK.
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tcr11050 In reply to Gequibren [2018-05-08 01:21:42 +0000 UTC]
I will agree, they did a fine job bringing him to life.
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