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Published: 2002-02-12 03:14:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1350; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 106
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Description I made this for english class. I am in grade 11.

the teacher gave me 25/25 (should bring up my mark after a 57% on an essay), so I thought I'd post it up here
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Comments: 5

albenliao [2004-04-20 09:26:21 +0000 UTC]

good job

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albenliao [2004-04-20 09:25:34 +0000 UTC]

nice job,feeling very good!

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liquify [2002-02-22 14:47:42 +0000 UTC]

this is stellar.. BUT.

and of course there's a but when i leave a comment. ;D

try to blur the edges of the perrier bottle, the pixellated lining around the focal point of the piece is distracting from the overall effect. if you're going for a smooth, calming image.. ensure that you hit every detail.

othat than that? nothing. this piece is pleasing to the eye and perfect for perrier's image.
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with the ill behavior.

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genetici [2002-02-18 17:06:32 +0000 UTC]

a good eye for soft color backgrounds

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GET ME OUT OF GERMANY!
>> NETHERLANDS OR USA
JOB OFFERS WELCOME
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cjn1k [2002-02-12 03:18:14 +0000 UTC]

nice work... do people really sell water in glass bottles? seems kinda wasteful... then again, who the hell buys bottle water... nevermind

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