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Published: 2007-06-21 13:44:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 596; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 17
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Description Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn't it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up. You build up all these defenses, you build up a whole suit of armor, so that nothing can hurt you, then one stupid person, no different from any other stupid person, wanders into your stupid life...You give them a piece of you. They didn't ask for it. They did something dumb one day, like smile at you, and then your life isn't your own anymore. Love takes hostages. It gets inside you. It eats you out and leaves you crying in the darkness, so a simple phrase like 'maybe we should be just friends' turns into a glass splinter working its way into your heart. It hurts. Not just in the imagination. Not just in the mind. It's a soul-hurt, a real gets-inside-you-and-rips-you-apart pain. I hate love.
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Comments: 8

alittlecrazyuphere [2009-10-23 17:27:27 +0000 UTC]

this is from neil gaiman.

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wicked-mushroom [2008-03-23 15:11:56 +0000 UTC]

wow... i'm glad i don't feel the same way anymore

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PeANuT-FreAk [2008-01-24 11:20:36 +0000 UTC]

very nice introduction..

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JaraRathos [2008-01-06 23:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's really good...and so true. That's amazing.

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mis0angel [2007-09-30 08:50:47 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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Z-axer [2007-09-21 03:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow ! That's amazing. The more I read it, the more I'm thinking like this...

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MrBlackmore [2007-09-13 12:58:55 +0000 UTC]

IM FIRST ! !"11 ! LOL. No I'm actually the second. Damn it. I just don't like first comments just saying that somebody were here first. It's annoying and useless.

But now to the point. This paragraph is clever & so true, like mentioned in previous comment. Good luck with your novel, or have you already finished it...?

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Belenchu [2007-08-28 16:50:44 +0000 UTC]

So true Ur amazing

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