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Description It was fairly obvious. To nearly everyone. Except Naruto. It was obvious how Hinata felt; how much she loved him. But the boy was a fool. Too focused on his dream, too focused on his ongoing rivalry....and way too focused on Sakura....

A growl escaped from another young ninja as he watched his teammate struggle.. As he watched her try to get Naruto to pay attention to her. But the blonde had gotten impatient with her stutters...her inability to speak. He had never even noticed it only really happened when she was around him....

Kiba walked over to the poor girl. He could never admit it....but he had a thing for her nearly as badly as she did for Naruto. The good thing was he was never nervous around her. They had been teammates for a number of years. He stared into his friends disappoitned expression before wrapping an arm around her shoulders.

“C’mon, Hinata. If he hasn’t figured it out by now, he’s not worth the time. Naruto’s a fool, and he doesn’t deserve you. There are plenty of other guys that would love your attention.” He watched as lavender eyes turned to him....nearly to the point of tears...and he couldn’t help staring Hinata was shy, timid...had very little confidence. But Kiba loved her. She had a sweet personality...she was stronger than she appeared, or even thought she was. And she was the most beautiful girl he knew.....

He blinked as the realization that he had just missed something struck him. . “Sorry Hinata. What did you say?”
“You’re wrong. Being quiet has it’s disadvantages...and one of them is noone ever knows the real you. It’s my fault, I suppose....but it’s a habit I can’t seem to break. And as long as I remain this way....noone cares to get to know someone they think as feeble, and desperate.”

Kiba’s jaw dropped at his friends sudden statement. She was being honest, open...and she wasn’t blushing when she spoke. He steered her away from the center of town. “No. You’re wrong. People don’t care for others simply because of their strength. And in my opiniong...being quiet is better than talking nonstop.” they passed by two chattering girls. “Look at THEM. They never shut up...and that hasn’t gotten them anywhere. Neither one has Sasuke yet, do they?” Kiba gestured towards the two girls....not realizing the icy glare he received in response when he was heard. His attention was completely on Hinata.

They came upon their usual training field and Kiba led his friend to the post, before leaning against it. “Hinata. Believe me. Naruto isn’t worth your time. His attention is in a million different directions....Hokage, ramen, training, hokage, Sakura, hokage, Sasuke....Hokage...”
He trailed off slowly, watching as a small smile lit Hinata’s delicate features.
“You said hokage four times.”

Kiba grinned. “Yes. I did. That’s because it’s where most of his concentration is at. He’ll do anything to achieve the goal....and he doesn’t realize what’s going on around him.” Kiba wrapped his arms around Hinata...pulling her into a hug. “He has yet to grow up. I meant it, there are a million guys who would love to have you.”

Hinata hugged back fiercely....Kiba was her best friend, her confidant. But her eyes widened as her friend dropped a light kiss on her lips before breaking the embrace. “Kiba?” she questioned uncertainly, earning a grin in response. “Some even in Konoha.” he finished his previous statement. A thoughtful expression crossed her before she hugged Kiba again.
“Do you mean it?” she asked quietly...but she felt the body against hers jerk as he nodded. “I do, Hinata. I like you.....and although we’ve been friends....teammates...I can’t help it.” he broke off as he pulled from the hug, reaching a hand forward to pinch her nose. “You’re just so damn cute.” he added teasingly.....pleased at the blush he received. And of the fact that this blush....wasn’t due to Naruto. It was because of him. Kiba Inuzuka. The dog-man...whom everyone else found smelly and irritating....

He leant close once again....to drop off another gentle kiss.....
Or atleast, thats how it had started.......
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Comments: 94

gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to ??? [2011-11-09 03:18:39 +0000 UTC]

I try ^^

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animeluvr999721 In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2012-03-31 18:02:56 +0000 UTC]

you succeed!!!

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NarutoEater [2011-07-13 09:39:52 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE AMAZING!I LOVE IT!I FEEL LIKE KIBA IS MY ALTER EGO!(I'm a guy,I just like KibaHina)KIBAHINA FTW!!!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to NarutoEater [2011-11-09 03:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness! Havent found many male naruto readers

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NarutoEater In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2011-11-09 17:15:16 +0000 UTC]

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SoulandMakaLove15 [2011-04-07 04:34:20 +0000 UTC]

MAKE A SEQUEL! MAKE A SEQUEL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to SoulandMakaLove15 [2011-11-09 03:19:19 +0000 UTC]

If I can get the juices flowing again

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TheStoryNeverEnds [2011-01-29 18:08:25 +0000 UTC]

W000000000t!!! So adorable! I freaking love it! KibaHina fluff forever!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to TheStoryNeverEnds [2011-11-09 03:19:32 +0000 UTC]

<3 it was my first kibahina

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TheStoryNeverEnds In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2011-11-09 04:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Love your icon, by the way.

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to TheStoryNeverEnds [2011-11-09 05:21:22 +0000 UTC]

So do I >D

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kibahinaforever [2011-01-11 17:47:22 +0000 UTC]

that was the most beautiful love story I have ever! Keep up the good work!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to kibahinaforever [2011-11-09 03:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaank you~

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i-come-from-pluto [2010-09-20 16:25:48 +0000 UTC]

i love it ^^ kiba's personality is so damn cute . and he's not smelly . he has to keep clean so he can smell everything besides himself with that amazingly sexy nose of his

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to i-come-from-pluto [2011-11-09 03:20:08 +0000 UTC]

DEfinitely. I love Kiba so much, I named my dog Kiba

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Orzonix [2010-09-02 00:09:51 +0000 UTC]

i loved it! i really liked how u started it out with her liking someone else then ending it with Hinata liking Kiba. 10/10

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to Orzonix [2011-11-09 03:20:25 +0000 UTC]

<3 one of my fave straight pairings

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Orzonix In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2011-11-11 11:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Same

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Taismo411 [2010-08-05 17:27:55 +0000 UTC]

No, this doesn't suck, IT ROYALLY KICKS ASS!!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to Taismo411 [2011-11-09 03:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you!!!11!!

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Frost-chan [2010-07-31 06:32:33 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAWWWWWW SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!

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babyboybluecrazy [2010-06-27 02:11:06 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh sssssssssssssssooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to babyboybluecrazy [2010-07-08 14:13:25 +0000 UTC]

XD ty

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babyboybluecrazy [2010-06-27 02:11:03 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh sssssssssssssssooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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babyboybluecrazy [2010-06-27 02:09:24 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh sssssssssssssssooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DAnYUnAi [2010-05-23 03:18:29 +0000 UTC]

i want to hear more it's sooo awsome!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to DAnYUnAi [2010-07-08 14:13:52 +0000 UTC]

I might start an actual story for it at some point, do a little tune up and replot it out

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YellowRose-Nett [2010-04-07 02:19:25 +0000 UTC]

"You're just so damn cute." That made me laugh! I like both KibaHina and NaruHina. Actually, I'm with even feelings about them both, haha. Did I trail off again?...Anyway, awesome fanfic!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to YellowRose-Nett [2010-07-08 14:13:59 +0000 UTC]

:3 ty

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crimsonati-girl [2010-04-05 01:26:09 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwww! im glad there are some stories ouut there where hinatas not portrayed as a slut.

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to crimsonati-girl [2010-04-06 08:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Hinatas too adorable to portray as a slut >w<

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kesaiapearl [2010-03-22 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]

8D KibaHina yess. Naruto can just go after forehead girl

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to kesaiapearl [2010-04-06 08:48:19 +0000 UTC]

I, particularly dont like NaruSaku. Nor do I like GaaSaku or GaaHina; though admittedly I can tolerate GaaHina more so. Im purely of the opinion with Naruto's behavior, He's in love with Sasuke and doesn want to admit to being gay. Or in another case, bi.

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Inu-Hinata [2010-01-06 11:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Aw, that's so cute!

I really love it

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to Inu-Hinata [2010-01-07 05:02:57 +0000 UTC]

^0^ thanks!

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orange-ninja-punk [2009-09-20 21:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww! this is so cute! I love it!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to orange-ninja-punk [2009-10-16 15:19:19 +0000 UTC]

x3 aww, thanks1 it means alot

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orange-ninja-punk In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2009-10-17 01:48:22 +0000 UTC]

x3 you're welcome =]

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to orange-ninja-punk [2009-10-29 15:56:05 +0000 UTC]

^^

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kibahina8 [2009-09-19 23:51:09 +0000 UTC]

that was one of the best kibahina story i read in a while

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to kibahina8 [2009-10-16 15:21:17 +0000 UTC]

OwO thanks!

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kibahina8 In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2009-10-20 14:16:17 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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hinata2233 [2009-09-17 02:34:15 +0000 UTC]

KibaHina is so cute! I don't usually read KibaHina fanfiction on deviantart.com or fanfiction.net so it's kinda different from the SasuHina stories I usually read, and though they are an unlikely couple and not a lot of people like, I myself just read them to see the different personalities the authors give Sasuke, and sometime Hinata. Sorry for blabbing on and on, but awesome short story

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to hinata2233 [2009-10-16 15:26:07 +0000 UTC]

XDDD thank j00!

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mermaidsirensong [2009-08-02 22:48:01 +0000 UTC]

i heart it!<3 its so cute!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to mermaidsirensong [2009-08-31 18:55:18 +0000 UTC]

xDDD TY! My first KibaHina. I tihnk it could be ten times better, tho

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mermaidsirensong In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2009-09-19 14:54:18 +0000 UTC]

its so sweet...

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to mermaidsirensong [2009-10-29 16:11:53 +0000 UTC]

ty

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JoeCoool [2009-07-06 05:20:43 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why I didn't this before, but I guess I'll do it now. This is great! I love the dialogue between the two, and the entire thing is very well written! Excellent work!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to JoeCoool [2009-07-08 14:19:09 +0000 UTC]

XD ty, it means alot!

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