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What do you seeWhen you look into my eyes
Is it my love
Or the way for you my heart cries
Or course it isnβt
I am just the friend your heart forgot
Bound by that relationship
Something more is what I am not
What do you see
When engrossed in your dreams
Am I ever there
Or does it follow some fantasy themes
You are in mine
When I close my eyes there you stand
Moving ever closer
A soft kiss and then you take my hand
But now I am back in reality
Lying alone in my bed
It was all part of my creativity
Iβll always be with you only inside my head
What do you see
As it is not what I do
I just wish that someday
You will close my eyes and see me like I see you
Comments: 11
Very nice rhyme scheme, it's hard to pull off.
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You are in mine
When I close my eyes there you stand
Moving ever closer
A soft kiss and then you take my hand
What do you see
As it is not what I do
I just wish that someday
You will close my eyes and see me like I see you
sweetly-melancholic.....beautiful ending...nice work
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Wow!!!! Thats so cool, and touching, and just so well written.
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Very awesome poem!! It's so touching and sweet!
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wow.. this is so nice.. i love it... great job well written
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"I just wish that someday
You will close my eyes and see me like I see you"
man i love this part...its sweet...touchy tho..and nicely written...awesome job on this
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