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jester81 [2005-01-05 04:55:35 +0000 UTC]
PS- Love the Preview for your prose. You in black and white and everything else in color.
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jester81 [2005-01-05 04:54:32 +0000 UTC]
*Bravo* You are quite the creative one. Really Sweet and sad story. Excellent work. Did notice something: The line "The continued driving until she got close to her destination" Should read "She continued driving until she got close to her destination." Also in the last paragraph you use the word sad a lot, taking a little away from the story, so I was thinking instead of "she was merely a sad sob story" could be written as "She was merely another statistic." *Just a thought* Again great job on the story.
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kingofdaalpine [2004-12-11 19:45:19 +0000 UTC]
::blown threw wall by the kickass of your story::
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deKAy32 [2004-12-09 17:41:23 +0000 UTC]
o.o;;; I think I love you.
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Jessalee [2004-12-09 15:46:20 +0000 UTC]
*sigh*
Believe it or not, this is how I feel sometimes. Yes, the Farley gets depressed.
I wonder if anyone would miss me?
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conraddyer [2004-12-09 04:00:45 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is kinda depressing. written well though.
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fuzzah In reply to conraddyer [2004-12-10 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.. it kinda was meant to be depressing though.. I was having a rough night, and lacking a camera, I just picked up pen and paper and just let it all out.. this is what came into mind.. so, yeah. Not that I'd EVER do such a thing.. but ya know.
Thanks for reading it though, Conrad. I appreciate it tons.
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