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frigidbloodalchemist — what about me

Published: 2011-03-11 02:21:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 6671; Favourites: 258; Downloads: 41
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Description Why? Why is it so dark, master where are you, I’m so lonely.
Why can’t I see, why can’t I speak? Help somebody help?
"It’s so cold....
Master where are you? It’s so quiet,
Don’t leave me please don’t leave me; I don’t want to be alone.
I’m not dead, don’t leave me...

Will I be lost here forever? I hear voices now, such sad voices, they say to wait, wait and someone will come, come to free us.
I never wanted to replace anyone, it’s just a name
I’m tired now, wake me when you return"

hmm contemplating doing a sequel pasta to: [link] only within the pokemon world rather than a urban ledgend style pasta.
these are real;ly fun to do so I guessed the only way Id get good at it is if I do more...right? XD
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Comments: 34

Tricia-of-Mewni [2019-08-26 00:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing story, please make the sequel!

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KI113RTAC0 [2013-05-16 08:45:04 +0000 UTC]

such a great story
[link]

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BadgerQWERT [2012-09-07 01:01:20 +0000 UTC]

PLEEEEAAAAAASE MAKE THAT SEQUEL!!

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Moonsong-the-warrior [2012-08-20 22:19:14 +0000 UTC]

poor baby :c I WILL KILL DOSZAP WITH FIRE!!!

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KawaiiLover50 [2012-07-25 05:50:31 +0000 UTC]

SHHHHHHHHHHHHHAT...i have a Zaptos in my 6 pokemon lineup.... *tkes care of it from now on* o_o"

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elfpup [2011-11-18 23:06:44 +0000 UTC]

dooooo it!!!!

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ShiningFeline [2011-05-30 10:24:09 +0000 UTC]

So, this one is REPLACED right? I think you should write a sequel pasta to DOSZAP about what happens to REPLACED.

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AnotherYinYangManga [2011-05-30 04:38:25 +0000 UTC]

awww (hugs dozap number 2)

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dogs-dont-byte [2011-05-16 21:22:38 +0000 UTC]

that story ws so sad kaaa!

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Tigerheart302 [2011-05-15 09:51:25 +0000 UTC]

i feel so bad for Replaced... it really wasn't his fault that Doszap did that.

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CookehProdutions [2011-03-30 17:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Poor Replaced..

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CyberTiger88 [2011-03-14 20:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Cool! How you did the shading of the background on this one? Looks like the stuff that appears on black and white bmp files on paint, but you put colors on it... I'm puzzled. o.O

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to CyberTiger88 [2011-03-14 23:22:01 +0000 UTC]

ah clever notice, I actually opened a black and white canvas , and drew it on that, then opened a color one filled in red, copied and pasted from the b/w one with the white color set as transparent ^^

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Frudies [2011-03-12 18:07:28 +0000 UTC]

cool

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PokemonTrainerHaley [2011-03-12 00:22:22 +0000 UTC]

I hope you make another! I loved your pasta, but I'd love to hear one within the pokemon world! I love your drawings and storys! C:

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Fenori [2011-03-12 00:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Poor Replaced D: I felt so bad for him in the story... ;A; sequel would be interesting o-o

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realwarriorfrosty [2011-03-11 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

sweet

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Starshine1225 [2011-03-11 21:48:42 +0000 UTC]

just epic
it gives such a good image on Doszap
that story
at the end
it like well
amazed me so much
i love this pic and the story

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MoonlitSoulWolf [2011-03-11 17:06:17 +0000 UTC]

poor doszap

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Jayfeather911 [2011-03-11 12:42:01 +0000 UTC]

You are getting SUPER amazing Flighty

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Louwky [2011-03-11 11:14:35 +0000 UTC]

ooohh that's sad

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KarkatthewVantas [2011-03-11 05:24:27 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AMAZING <3
Love the blood dripping from his beak XD
-wishes to be able to draw blood in Paint-

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Merginae [2011-03-11 03:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Aw, I wanna hug him. DX
But Zapdos always looks so...pointy...it might hurt. o3o

Great job! The poem thingy is really sad, too. =C

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P1XlE [2011-03-11 03:21:13 +0000 UTC]

The poem's so sad. D; The drawing is great, though I could say that you could possibly do better at the legs there. ^o^; They don't naturally fold that way. Smack me if I'm wrong. I'm no good with anatomy. .___.

You should make more creepypastas! I read the one in the Artist's Comments and I enjoyed it. moar.

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SugarPlumKitty [2011-03-11 03:09:02 +0000 UTC]

you should do another! I would love to see DOSZAP2's reaction to the whole situation!!

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Xxmoonlight-xX [2011-03-11 03:08:06 +0000 UTC]

epic pic and poor thing that is a sad poem like thing good job ^^

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miotide [2011-03-11 02:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Poor 2nd DOSZAP. ;_; I'll hug you. *hugs 2nd DOSZAP*
Beautiful job as always. Keep up the good work, Flighty.

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mewlover123 [2011-03-11 02:49:39 +0000 UTC]

as amazing as the story

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Igike [2011-03-11 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]

epic!

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silverlionwolf [2011-03-11 02:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Aw! It's poor DOSZAP the second!

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BonesXShatter [2011-03-11 02:33:13 +0000 UTC]

aww poor lil zapdos =c epic drawing though ^^

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Peachfootluv [2011-03-11 02:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Once again- scary!

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Draghanell [2011-03-11 02:24:57 +0000 UTC]

right so it lost it's sight and voice? that sucks :l awesome pic tho

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Bloodwolf817 [2011-03-11 02:23:35 +0000 UTC]

nice

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