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Published: 2011-04-22 19:45:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 394; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description New model
Test shoot
Please fave and comment

Clothes picked by me
Hair and make up done by me and her
Model: Rrita
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Comments: 3

2Loose2Trek [2011-04-22 20:02:40 +0000 UTC]

This is an attractive model and the photo is well composed. The main fault I find with it is the cluttered background which competes with the foreground figure. I'd recommend using DOF (depth of field) to put the background out of focus thus emphasizing the character.

Failing that, you can use your photo editor to blur the background. Here's how what I mean. It took a couple of minutes to do this: [link]

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FragileEternity In reply to 2Loose2Trek [2011-04-22 20:12:47 +0000 UTC]

I see, that is better.
Thank you for showing me that

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2Loose2Trek In reply to FragileEternity [2011-04-22 20:19:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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