theflyingkatsu [2015-08-28 04:45:12 +0000 UTC]
This came out pretty nice! My main suggestion would be to make the light from the fire (hitting the fox, grass, and logs, and possibly the front row of trees) more yellow-orange instead of just lighter shades of whatever color is there. That will help to convey the warmth of the fire and make the logs look less shiny/mossy.
I also wonder if it would be beneficial to change the perspective so that there is more focus on the sky than there is on the fox/fire. Right now the trees and mountains take up a lot of valuable space, and if you were to allocate more of that space for the sky, you could bring out more detail in the meteor shower. In that case you might want to reduce the density of the stars so that the meteors aren't camouflaged up there.
As for help with apparent size, here are some perceptual tricks that may help:
1. Use parallel perspective lines to make objects seem bigger/farther away where the lines converge. Traditionally shown with a cat on train tracks.
Example with two equally sized circles:
2. Make perceptually equal-sized objects (like bricks) denser (smaller and more numerous) where you want things to appear bigger/farther away. This could work on things like rooftop tiles or leaves on a tree.
Example with a simple brick wall and two equally sized circles:
3. Combine parallel perspective lines and dense objects to form a perspective grid. This is really helpful for setting up a scene (perhaps with the positions of trees in the grid).
Example: The top circle seems bigger/farther away because the grid boxes (assumed by the viewer to be equally sized) get smaller and converge closer to the top circle than to the bottom circle.
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