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FountainsOfMars — Kissing Winter
Published: 2020-03-10 22:32:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description I'm kissing winter fiercely
trying to get cold
Too many feels caught up here
and they really need to go

my passions ~ they exhaust me
they lay waste to my soul
Dwindle it to ashes
on winds away to float

I cannot beam a balance
I can't disrupt the flow
As if the lava soothes my skin
with each slow wave and roll

And even though it burns me
with every fevered grope
I'm kissing winter fiercely
still trying to let you go
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Comments: 8

QuantumOfHope [2020-03-11 10:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. This is my favourite so far I think.
It's always the passionate ones that hurt the most.

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FountainsOfMars In reply to QuantumOfHope [2020-03-12 01:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Hope...
Thank you for this.
Thank you so much for this..

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onthemoonpoetry [2020-03-11 09:42:06 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars In reply to onthemoonpoetry [2020-03-12 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much for your kind feedback!
And for the watch!
And for the fave.
And for taking the time to read some of my stuff.
I'm deeply appreciative.
😉

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ShadowsofLight777 [2020-03-11 01:27:13 +0000 UTC]

I adore the title

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FountainsOfMars In reply to ShadowsofLight777 [2020-03-12 01:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!
I'm kinda fond of the title too!
I might even use it again 😂😂😂

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Ashen-Tomorrow [2020-03-10 23:23:06 +0000 UTC]

If you think you have more to say, make a companion piece.

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Ashen-Tomorrow [2020-03-12 01:20:02 +0000 UTC]

Great idea. Thank you. Idea certainly eases me into letting it go like i did.

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