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fia2 — Ode to EE Cummings
Published: 2004-11-03 03:54:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Description Down you go
So I know
Said I who knew
{you did}

Convey
Compell;
Force- into
{swell}
Joy is forth
Or # is it?

SLUPME
dest(it)ution(alize)
G% honiesuckle
{ Down in
Cold daylight breeze}

Am.our
Oh-pho
Bia (desne)
terror & bygone

Peace will come
There let it be done
For now I am away
{You are}
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Comments: 6

lindsayisninja [2010-06-07 02:38:19 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool, i love it. my favourite by him is the one about the wind or something and the words are falling down, and "my sweet old etcetera" ^^ that poem is on my wall in my bedroom.

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Nenshou-kun [2007-04-13 00:59:15 +0000 UTC]

E.E. Cummings is my favorite poet, and I like your work lots.

My favorite poem is [link] and my second favorite is [link]

E.E. Cummings had meanings for every symbol he used in every poem, is that what you did? O_O

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Korubi-Draconis [2004-11-04 07:48:57 +0000 UTC]

ok, i wont be so consetited to say i understand it, but i do find it very pleasing to read. i dont see this style often, and well i think its a very good style. very very fine job

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fia2 In reply to Korubi-Draconis [2004-11-05 04:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave Korubi!!

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theamos [2004-11-03 23:11:26 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea what it means... and I'm running short on time, so I have no time to analyze it... urk... sorry, I'll try again tomorrow!

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fia2 In reply to theamos [2004-11-05 04:26:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem. xD I didn't understand it myself as I wrote it, but I do now. It's actually a lot less technical than you think... the words write themselves, it's really weird. o_O It helps if you have a good typing rythm. Try it sometime!
The line breaks and hyphens and brackets and such are more for pacing than anything. Some words are also twisted around... Some parts are just so plain confusing, though, I don't even bother trying to ask my brain why. So you don't have to get every single line!

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