haphazardmelody [2015-02-20 03:01:56 +0000 UTC]
"We laugh ourselves" -- I'm assuming you meant "We laugh to ourselves"?I love the bitter irony of this.
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songsforever [2014-12-22 16:57:09 +0000 UTC]
I like this very much. Well done. I get teased by my aunt and uncle all the time for being "too attached" to my technology. If I'm honest with myself, I am attached to them, but not as severely as they think. I remember a time when my family literally could not afford a computer for my house. We kept having to go over to my dad's office to type papers because of that fact, and I remember thinking how AWESOME my peers were if they had a computer at their house. Anyway, thankyou for sharing this with us. Again, well done.
fernknits [2014-10-27 08:30:25 +0000 UTC]
No, it's not. That's what I was trying to say here, so I'm glad you made this comment, because clearly I didn't say it. I hoped the line "sometimes/we also forget to look up" along with some of the imagery would convey that the "adults" also had their heads down and in their phones -- perhaps I need to thicken that up a bit? Because it's definitely not just the teenagers.
nightshade-keyblade [2014-10-27 01:49:59 +0000 UTC]
It's not just the teenagers, mind you.