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Ferelwing — If you hear

Published: 2009-11-12 19:36:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 644; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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Description The second poem for my dear Piratess.. As I said, she became a Pirate for a reason.. Broken heart and all.. Now she seeks treasure and adventure.
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Comments: 16

coyotepam [2009-11-26 06:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work. Love and Hugs...Pam

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Ferelwing In reply to coyotepam [2009-11-26 07:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much Pam!

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coyotepam In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-28 23:04:30 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome sweetie. Love and Hugs...Pam

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Lillymoondragon [2009-11-19 14:30:57 +0000 UTC]

I see why you like this one better. I agree.
I still have a problem with the second line and 4th from the bottom. But they aren't bad. Just broke the flow for me.

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Ferelwing In reply to Lillymoondragon [2009-11-19 20:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I still likes em

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Lillymoondragon In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-19 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]

oh, I do too don't get me wrong. Am I too honest???

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Ferelwing In reply to Lillymoondragon [2009-11-19 23:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Nah, just being me. I didn't have a problem with the flow, but I can see where some would.

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Vixxenfairy [2009-11-13 07:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is just amazing! I love learning more about her!

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Ferelwing In reply to Vixxenfairy [2009-11-13 17:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, ironically the first line was inspired by the kids dropping a plate.. The shattering sound hit me and then I couldn't stop thinking..

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DragonsChest [2009-11-13 06:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Powerful.

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Ferelwing In reply to DragonsChest [2009-11-13 17:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you.. Ironically, the first line came to me when I heard my kids drop a plate and the "shatter" sound reverberated into my psyche. The rest of the poem came as I tried to figure out my dear Piratess.

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motherearth23-stock [2009-11-12 22:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful words again.

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Ferelwing In reply to motherearth23-stock [2009-11-12 22:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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motherearth23-stock In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-13 03:57:16 +0000 UTC]

You are very welome!

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Canankk [2009-11-12 21:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Very good combination!

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Ferelwing In reply to Canankk [2009-11-12 21:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart! I'm so glad you like it!

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