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Ferelwing — For so long

Published: 2009-10-24 00:36:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1175; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 25
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Description It's hard to explain where this came from.. It really is..

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Lillymoondragon [2009-11-10 14:51:56 +0000 UTC]

strange you don't know where this comes from when it seems so obvious to me. But I don't see a comment from him did he even realize??? Well worded and written beautifully

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Ferelwing In reply to Lillymoondragon [2009-11-10 20:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I wrote it for him and Chris.. Chris was going through a really rough patch.. This was how I felt for them both and still feel.. This poem actually woke Chris up which makes me feel a lot better. So he's trying at least now.

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Lillymoondragon In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-10 22:23:05 +0000 UTC]

well that's good.It's a start.

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Ferelwing In reply to Lillymoondragon [2009-11-11 01:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the other person isn't aware it was also for them and I doubt they will figure it out.

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Lillymoondragon In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-11 02:11:17 +0000 UTC]

do you know if he's even read it???

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Ferelwing In reply to Lillymoondragon [2009-11-11 02:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he has. *grin*

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ricky4 [2009-10-29 14:01:55 +0000 UTC]

3 strong and conceptual poetries dear! Congratz!

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Ferelwing In reply to ricky4 [2009-10-29 16:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Ricky!

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ricky4 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-31 05:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Anytime Li!

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Vixxenfairy [2009-10-26 11:26:31 +0000 UTC]

So very powerful sis!

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Ferelwing In reply to Vixxenfairy [2009-10-26 16:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much hon!

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DragonsChest [2009-10-25 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

An absolute beauty of a verse...

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Ferelwing In reply to DragonsChest [2009-10-25 05:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart!

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DragonsChest In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-28 05:03:41 +0000 UTC]


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AerithKuran [2009-10-24 21:18:16 +0000 UTC]

i love it!! it's so moving

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Ferelwing In reply to AerithKuran [2009-10-25 05:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much hon.

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AerithKuran In reply to Ferelwing [2009-12-21 19:18:10 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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MagicoffMusic [2009-10-24 13:50:39 +0000 UTC]

, very emotional and strong poem.

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Ferelwing In reply to MagicoffMusic [2009-10-25 05:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon

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MagicoffMusic In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-25 07:00:49 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome hon.

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starlight2infinity [2009-10-24 09:53:55 +0000 UTC]

very powerful
and yes most distressing a situation of the mind.
how to get some one out of a hole without falling into it with them.
Esp when they wont or cant seem to help them selfs to start with

Powerful Dear

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Ferelwing In reply to starlight2infinity [2009-10-25 06:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it really sucks when someone you care about is so far down and you can't bring them back up *sigh* . Thanks hon.

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starlight2infinity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-25 08:40:19 +0000 UTC]

yep sadly sometime people go there and there is not much you can do
the old saying "you can lead a horse to water but you cant make him drink"

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Ferelwing In reply to starlight2infinity [2009-10-25 18:28:01 +0000 UTC]

So very very true! I hope that he'll pull himself out of it though.

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starlight2infinity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-28 08:15:19 +0000 UTC]

true and hopefully yes sometimes people just plain have to make the decision and work at keeping it..
nothing anyone can do

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Ferelwing In reply to starlight2infinity [2009-10-28 17:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Exactly, I hate the helpless feeling I get when I can't do anything and know I can't..

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starlight2infinity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-29 04:48:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah so true and yep so hard like sitting on your hands while it all happens around you

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Ferelwing In reply to starlight2infinity [2009-10-29 20:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I think that's the worst part.

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starlight2infinity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-30 00:29:19 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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Ferelwing In reply to starlight2infinity [2009-10-30 00:29:59 +0000 UTC]

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starlight2infinity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-30 01:42:16 +0000 UTC]

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nitchwarmer [2009-10-24 00:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Very vivid. I can feel you. I think most of us can relate and makes us sympathize with the writer. Empathy is a very common draw in most poetry. You shared it so dramatically. Great Job.
Hope this makes sense.....

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Ferelwing In reply to nitchwarmer [2009-10-24 02:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart, yeah it made perfect sense. Sometimes I just can't find a way to express myself any other way. Words just don't express it well.. If that makes ANY sense..

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nitchwarmer In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-24 02:38:28 +0000 UTC]

You don't seem to have a problem putting words together. I think you get your point across well.
I do know what you mean. That what I use my art for. Self expression. I tend to tell stories and express feeling with the artist comments.

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Ferelwing In reply to nitchwarmer [2009-10-24 02:54:55 +0000 UTC]

It's sometimes easier for me to express things in art or poetry then it is to have a conversation. I don't know why it works that way but sometimes.. It's the only way I can get through to people.

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AleksdeArt [2009-10-24 00:44:18 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem

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Ferelwing In reply to AleksdeArt [2009-10-24 02:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart.

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giffordm [2009-10-24 00:39:06 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing sweetheart.

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Ferelwing In reply to giffordm [2009-10-24 02:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much love.

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giffordm In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-24 03:20:23 +0000 UTC]

=] you're welcome

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AeliaNaqwiDesigns [2009-10-24 00:38:53 +0000 UTC]

wonderful..

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Ferelwing In reply to AeliaNaqwiDesigns [2009-10-24 02:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much Skye!

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AeliaNaqwiDesigns In reply to Ferelwing [2009-10-24 15:45:18 +0000 UTC]

your welcome,Li

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