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Β This has be one of my favorite pieces of art on DA.
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wonderful work (your whole gallery is incredible!) i love the complexity of this piece and the potential for a story
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Great job! I only see a few small things that could be fixed (because I'm picky 
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thanks! Please tell me what they are
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Well, if you're just as picky...They are seriously minor ^^
The knee is a bit pointy in the mirrored version.
her underwear doesn't perfectly line up in the mirrored version as well.
The bottome leg doesn't completely match up with the mirrored version.
I think that's it.
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Dang that is so gorgeous. And what woman doesn't recognize that expression?
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You're so right, and thank you.
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Wow, what beautiful detail; I can't believe you even got the reflection on the side of the drain in the shower, nice! Great work!
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i find it difficult to do reflections without a reference picture...do you use one?...
very awesome job though
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It depends on the picture. Straight on mirrors are easier because you can basically just the outline. THis one was angled so I took my own reference picture using my sister as a model. The important thing with references is that you do not copy exactly and the imagination must compensate to make the lighting/colors fit in.
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Really? I was thinkng it was desaturated amd low contrast. So thanks! And thanks again for the redlines!
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well im partial to desat/low con XD so maybe i'm not the best judge. LOL
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Oh wow I really like this
- Make the toilet and bathtub bigger, compared to the girl they don't look human-sized. The shower is good but I think the shower head is too low down, like it looks like it's meant for a child. Maybe don't include it at all because I feel like if it were at the proper height it wouldn't be in the pic at all.
- Make the shadow under the products and girl more intense. Shadows like those tend to be sharper and very dark, especially in the harsh lighting of a bathroom.
- Speaking of shadows they could be more defined overall, like think about where the light source is and make it really obvious. Right now it kinda seems like the light is coming from somewhere in front of and above the girl, which, considering where she is, is a little bit unusual for a bathroom.
Other than I love the shading on everything, the glass and the toilet and shower and her skin look really good, perhaps think about defining her hair more. I think this is my fave from you so far, you're really amazing at realism
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HOLY CRAP NOOO I saved over the final image so now I have a very similar WIP image. POOOO
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Oh noooooooo that sucks D: ehhhhh well I'm sure it looks great either way :3
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I can do all those except change the toilet and bathtub. It took me days to get the perspective right and I can't fix it at this point. T_T I raised the shower. I cant get rid of it because I want to make the shower read better. I intesified the shadows as well but I'm not really sure of the lighting because there are room lights as well as white light from the window. And the room lights are those tacky mirror lights which is in my house in every bathroom so I suppose for me I thought it was normal XD I should work on that. THanks so much for the crit Peri! Its seriously helpful!
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Ahh it's fine if you don't change the toilet and whatnot, it still looks amazing
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i might be wrong but the fold on her tum tum dont match... i dunno
the fold on the girl , (its crossing belly button) it seems more apparent/noticeable than the one in the mirror
but other than that it really cool and purtiful
and i like hw she has beauty products out
so its kinda funny to me
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oh...really?
but i agree with all the other comments it is REALLY amazing and you have so much talent
and... wow this is really really really beautiful
i cant even find the right words, i tried finding a small prob to give u help, but it was hard finding a flaw
i had to find a tummy fold ^^'
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Fixed tell me what you think!
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Beautiful!
In truth i cant remember the older version ^^'
but fixed or not i think its purtiful
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Lol it was like five seconds ago! Thank you
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oh really? heh i guess im forgetful...then.. and your welcome
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very realistic! You are and will be an amazing artist
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Thank you! That means a lot to me
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