Ariykoi [2006-07-03 03:41:38 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I'm glad you got your pencils and taht you got to finish you drawing!
Now for the fun part. X3 Even though I suck at this. x3
Oki, you want Critique, I'll give you the best I can. First off, One thing I notice, which isn't really major, but the legs seem a little fat to me... It could just be me, because I Like 'em thiner, but it's really your own call, not mine.
Next is the tail... It's good, but where it comes out of the body is in a bad position. It should flow down, not come straight out like hwta you have drawn. Simple thing to fix.
Sorry to address this, but the hands are too small. x3 I can't rally help you with that since I have the same problems. Also the arms do seem a little long now that I look at it... A little shorter and it'll be fine.
The hair seems a little weird to me... But I don't really know how to fix it... Maybe add a little more... But I don't really know.
That's about it for me. It's getting late, and I'm getting tired. For a first drawing of an anthro in a long time, you did pretty good! Keep it up!
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