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Published: 2015-12-30 04:22:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 578; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Say hello to the new and….improved? Broken….Yeah I don’t know. I had to work some things to explain Broken’s relative absence last term. Unfortunately he’s not flakey, but I am…so there had to be some reasoning….for me it was a job, but for him there had to be a little bit better of a story. And oddly enough I’m okay with this unexpected change. It leaves me room for some more work. Anyway say hello to the new Broken and I hope everyone can at least tolerate him for a little bit. I may work on some of the fill in stuff that was in here and post stories and stuff later….maybe tomorrow since I work open to close and most of it by myself and it’s suppose to rain. We’ll see how it goes. As always love ya’ll and hope you enjoy!!
"The tragedy of dreams is that they often turn into nightmares"
Basic Information
Name: Broken Graveyard
Age: unknown
Height: 5’9”
Species: experimental creation
Species Description: If your species is something unique or that you made up, write a little about it here.
Abilities:
- Knowledge of shadowmancy
- Icemancy
- Hand to hand combat
Academic Information
Level: advanced
Courses:
- SHD 401
- ELM 101
- ELM102
Passed Courses: All the shadowmnacy courses with the exception on the last three
Experience: I don’t know I haven’t checked in a while
Personal Information
Likes:
- Food
- Training- he trains so much now that his hands have to be constantly bandaged from splitting them open
- Blankets
- Weapons
- Blood
- Cold weather
- Cats
- Movies
Dislikes:
- Large crowds
- Hot anything
- People trying to get close to him
- Being tricked
- Medical or lab facilities of any kind
- Demons- tricky bastards
- Anywhere that is really light- his now almost white eyes don’t handle bright very well
Strengths:
- Deathly calm when not alone
- Brutal
- Controls ice
- Shadowmancer
Weaknesses:
- Slow- He has lost a lot of speed now that he’s in a new body. Sometimes it feels stiff and heavy to him
- Controlling his ice and shadows – His ice and shadows don’t want to listen to him as well in this form. His shadows don’t want to do anything and his ice wants to go berserk. He tends to freeze stuff accidently now and make his surroundings colder without realizing it. Using both effectively takes so concentration now.
- Mentioning his family- he feels like a failure to them and his guilt is crippling to the point he’ll lash out at people who bring up any member of his family
- Major headaches and chest pains- Another odd result of his new body is headaches from becoming one with the new digs same with the new heart crystal.
Goals:
- Regain full control over his abilities
- Become the horseman of war without losing himself completely so he can destroy any demon that crosses his path.
Fears:
- What he is
- Hurting anyone else that he cares about
Personality:
- quiet
- solitary
- aggressive
Long gone is the sweet, caring, want to befriend everyone Broken. In fact he is pretty much the opposite of everything he use to be. He’s now cold and calculated. He tries to avoid dealing with others as much as possible now a days actively keeping to himself. He has limited sense of mercy and compassion and is ready to do anything he has to. He despises who he has become, but has little control over it and views it as the only way to not hurt people he cares about. Deep down though most of it is that he is currently struggling with crippling grief and guilt. He tried so hard to change what he was created to be and failed to the point of hurting people he loved.
History:
Last semester was suppose to be his last at Otherworlde or so he hoped however fate had other plans. He became more and more withdrawn to a single minded goal of ending the experimentation that created him and his brothers so much so that mid way through the semester his shadow familiar Button actually took over being “seen” on campus for him. However once he disappeared completely so did she in a quest to find him. Right after the issuing of the first assignments Broken got word of a lab creating more experiments and went to check it out. There he found exact genetic duplicates of him and some of his Brothers. While attempting to destroy the clones he was confronted by Alice the head of the experimentation unit responsible for their creation. Broken lost in the battle against her, but was full awakened to what the experiments are. Each was an attempt to recreate the make up of the horsemen of the apocalypse. Each experiment fell into one of two categories a horse which were the weaker, but still viable experiments and the riders the stronger almost perfect replicas with a few minor flaws such as humanity. While with Alice he became the horseman of war, a perfect equivalent to the biblical counterpart. The ultimate goal was to turn them into full blown horsemen of the apocalypse to spread destruction and chaos. Under her control Broken killed two of his brothers Ghost and Toxin. He was ultimately stopped by Button and Seann, but at the high price of their lives as well. Seann used the power he had as the horse of death to transfer Broken from his old controlled body to his own which gave Broken back some sense of humanity. Ultimately though he was saved by attached twin experiments Break and Broke who Button gave up her existence to give form to. Now that he’s back to being a rider and his life is mostly devastated he is back to try and finish his degree.
Misc. Information:
- His eyes are almost white now with only a tiny sliver of light blue
- He is in a completely new body that isn’t his original it’s actually his brother Seann’s body
- He carries Button’s old ribbon on him at all times
- He still eats a lot and rather enjoys it
Character Relationships
| - Likes | - Dislikes | - Unsure | - Interested By | - Saddened By | - Fearful Of | - Crushing On | - Love |
Jinx: I still love you, but I’m not sure how you could even look at me at the moment. I couldn’t stand it if you rejected me now. I hope one day you’ll forgive me for what I am and what I’ve become.
Erin: …you’re my brother and I can’t even come and see you and explain what happened. What if you can’t forgive me…what would I do then?
Button: I miss you so much…..
Ghost and Toxin: I-I’m so sorry….
mDrake: My creepy, weird ass teacher….who hates my guts. He’ll probably be disgusted when he sees me this next term….HA…who are we kidding I already disgust him.
Kaine: Who?...Don’t worry I haven’t forgotten Kaine…not completely. Too bad.
Topaz: Who would have ever thought I would be a deadbeat father…right now though I’m probably the most dangerous thing for you to be around.
Break and Broke: I don’t know what Button was thinking, but she wouldn’t save you for nothing so I guess we’ll see how it goes.
Roleplaying Preferences
- Where do you like to roleplay? Notes, comments, skype? Anywhere really…you just may have to poke me if I haven’t responded after a couple days
- Preferences or limits: NNOOONNNEE
- Would you like to join the OW Skype Group? If so, indicate Skype username or note it to viralremix
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Helmy says:
Another year, another round of class signups! But it looks like you haven't signed up yet... Go figure! C'mon, be sure to get your signups done by May 7, 2017 or risk being fed to the monsters!
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Admissions Open + Course Sign Ups!:iconpurplesparklesplz::iconpurplesparklesplz:
Greetings, students and potentials! As the seasons begin to change and the snow outside begs to melt, our doors are opening once again. It is expected of upper years to be... 'welcoming', to new students as they enter our halls for the first time. Do be sure to show them around the haunted chambers and dungeons.
With that being said, one door opens and another must close. Another semester has come to an end, and it is time to choose courses for the new term. The staff are well aware that you do not have your final grades submitted to you, but please be advised they should be released in the coming weeks (by April 19th). Until then, you are free to submit your course timetable below and make any adjustments as necessary once final grades have been released. Be sure to bear in mind any prerequisites that courses may require, and whether or not you may need to retake a class.
One final announcement!
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Hello! If you haven't already, please be sure to comment which new classes you'd like to take on this journal as the new term at Otherworlde has started!
Grades and Course Sign ups (finally)!:iconpurplesparklesplz::iconpurplesparklesplz:
Jasper says:
Good evening, students! With the sincerest apologies for the delay, your final grades for the months of July, August, and September are here. Please check below to see how you did. If you passed the class... congratulations. If not, then you have failed and may either take the course again or other courses at the same level or below. Some students have graduated in classes - that is, they have moved from Bone to Blood, or so one. For those of you to which this applies, you are now eligible to take upper year courses that fall within your new class ranking. If you have issues with your grade, bring it up with your professor.
If you have any further questions, please feel free to ask any of the other staff (as I am quite lazy busy ((A/N: please feel free to reach out to any of the admins, including myself)) ).
Also, the master journal for October-November-December will be up shortly. Plea
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Jinx: *His heart lept in his chest when he saw Broken. Even though he looked quite different from the last time he saw him, he knew it was the man he cared for so deeply. He just knew it. He bolted as quickly as he could across the courtyard to catch him before he could slip away again. Last time he had disappeared without a trace and he wasn't going to let it happen again, not before he got a chance to talk to him again. He had something very important to tell him.* Dearest Broken, where have you been? I have been so worried about you... *He trailed off as he noticed the expression on the man's face.* W-What is wrong? You look as though you carry such weight on your shoulders! Has something happened? *He leaned up on his tip toes to take Broken's face into his hands, to offer some comfort if he could, but when his hands came into contact with the taller man's flesh, he recoiled with a cry of agony. His hands were smoking and had turned a burned, angry red. He stared at his hands in pain addled confusion.* I-I do not...understand? *He reached out to touch Broken again, this time to take his hand, but again he jerked back as the touch seemed to burn him. Tears welled in his eyes, from pain and frustration in equal measure.* W-What is happening, Broken?
[KJCAHKHFKJSLLSLGLJ, HOLY FRICK, BEKKA! HE'S SO CUTE OMG. Absolutely heartrending in the development department, but cute nonetheless. You've definitely outdone yourself on this one!]
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Broken: *his chest tensed as he heard the voice that called him. He knew exactly who it was and it wasn’t that he didn’t want to see Jinx, but he wasn’t sure how well it would go. How could he even begin to explain what had happened to the angel? How could he still love him after everything he had done. He should have just kept walking. It would be best for Jinx he had, but he loved him. He always had and nothing that had happened changed the fact that he loved Jinx. If anything he probably loved him more now than ever so instinctively that love caused him to stop and turn. He tried to hide how beat up he was, but it was no surprise that Jinx saw right threw it. What should he say to Jinx? How could he explain everything? In his distraction he didn’t even notice Jinx going to touch him. His eyes widened in terror as Jinx pulled away from him in pain. * J-Jinx Do- *He was too late. He watched as Jinx pulled back in pain again. Seeing the other cry was more painful then he could have ever imagined and knowing he caused it made it worse. * I-I’m sorry Jinx. This new body is difficult to control. *he closed his eyes and concentrated to cool his temperature and focusing his ice to his skin so it was cool to the touch once he was sure it was alright he reached out and took Jinx’s hands. He breathed cool air over the angry red skin before placing a cool kiss over them.* I’m so so sorry Jinx…I-I don’t even know where to begin. *His own eyes welled with tears and he pulled Jinx into a tight hug* P-please forgive me. I didn’t mean for any of this to happen….remember I love you….even if you hate me and everything I’ve become please just remember that much….I-I love you. *he hugged Jinx tighter placing soft repeated kisses on his cheek and neck.*
( I’m so glad you like him! I was so worried with such a major change that you’d hate him TT TT I fill so bad for Jinx. Poor baby!! )
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Jinx: *He hated himself for crying. It wasn't that big of a deal really. He had certainly felt worse pain than some light burning in the past, and he certainly would experience it again in the future. Perhaps it was the shock? Or the prospect of being unable to be near the one he had missed for so long? Whatever the reason, he still felt pathetic and weak, and he did his best to stop, though a few stray tears still slipped down his cheeks, stinging his flesh in the frigid air. A look of confusion passed across his face.* N-New body? *He sniffled a little* What do you mean, new body? *He supposed now what he looked at him up close, he did look much different than he had originally thought. He was shorter now, and his eyes, his eyes were so similar to the last time he had seen them, but at the same timer, looked almost completely different. He didn't understand. What was going on? He flinched a little when Broken touched him, afraid that he might be burned again, but relaxed into the touch when he found he was cool to the touch. He shivered a little at the touch of Broken's cold lips, but the feeling was not at all unpleasant. In fact, it was quite the opposite. The angry redness didn't fade much, and he knew that he'd need to take proper care of them when he got back to his room, but for now, the relief Broken was giving him was more than enough. He let out a shocked little gasp when he was pulled into a hug. He couldn't have been sure, but he had thought he had seen tears in Broken's eyes a moment ago. He wrapped his arms around the tall man's waist, hugging him tightly.* I forgive you! Whatever it is that you have done, I forgive you! *Tears began to well up in his own eyes again. Broken was beginning to scare him.* I implore you, Broken, impart to me what is wrong!
[Oh, I could never hate any of your characters! Especially not Broken! Besides, he's your's,so you can do what you want with him, right? 
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Broken: *He squeezed Jinx a little tighter. Not enough to hurt him but enough so that he knew the boy was really there and to keep him from running away not that the angel would have even if he didn’t hold onto him a little tighter. Where should he even begin. How should he start to explain everything that had happened to Jinx. He wasn’t even sure how he was really coping or that he even fully understood what had occurred. He kissed Jinx forehead softly but not allowing the angel to see his face since he was sure it would give away everything he was feeling * I-I don’t even know where I should start Jinx….I-I screwed up. I confronted Alice the demon heading up the experimentation project. I thought I could beat her…I…I thought I could end everything once and for all…And I was wrong…I was wrong! *As his focus changed he could feel his control weighing over his elements as soon as he realized it he pushed Jinx back taking a step away from him. He shadow ported to a nearby tree where Jinx could still see him. The last thing he wanted was to hurt Jinx.* I-I’m sorry Jinx. I screwed up. I killed Ghost Toxin and Seann…t-this is Seann’s body. H-he saved me by giving up his body….but there are still some major issues with it one of them being I struggle to control what I am….a-and my worst fear is that I’ll hurt you. I would never be able to forgive myself if I did anything to you…I love you…I’m just I’m afraid for you and everyone else I love. I don’t think I would ever recover if I did something to harm you Jinx. Enough people you cared about have hurt you…I refuse to be on that list. *He took a step forward before stopping and taking it back. He wanted to touch Jinx again, but he wasn’t sure it was a good idea*
{I’m so glad you like him….it’s always fun to have a little drama now and again LOL XD}
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Jinx: *The feeling of Broken's strong arms around him did very little to take the edge off of his fear this time. Something was terribly wrong, he just knew it. Never once since he first met Broken had he seen him act like this. It was terrifying to be honest. Broken was like a rock, strong and immovable, to see him shaken as this was something Jinx had not previous thought was possible. He flinched under the kiss, as the gentle touch surprised him. he buried his face in the man's chest. It was then that he noticed dimly, that he was able to reach a little higher than he used to. He knew he hadn't grown, so that must mean that Broken had shrunk? As he listened to Broken's story, his blood began to run cold in his veins. He stumbled when Broken pushed him and fell backwards, landing on the ground with a soft thump. He picked himself up, but didn't make a move to get closer to Broken. His hands flew up to cover his mouth when he spoke about killing his brothers. Tears filled his eyes as he took a step backward. No, no that couldn't be true. He knew Broken he was no killer. Not his Broken. The words 'what I am' seemed to hang heavily in the air between them. It was when he spoke about not wanting to hurt him that the change came over him. Though his eyes were still shining with tears, he marched up to Broken with a fiercely determined look on his face, though every fibre of his being told him he should run.* Broken, stop it. Stop this right now. *He took the man's face into his hands. This time again, steam rose from his hands where they were connected, but this time, the boy did not let go, though the pain was clear from his rigid posture.* Do not worry about me. I can handle this. You are hurt Broken. What you did weighs heavily upon you, but you are not alone. Please remember that.
[He's beautifully drawn and written, there's nothing to dislike ^^. I couldn't agree more]
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Broken: *his chest tightened as he watched Jinx’s reaction to what he was telling him. Even though he expected Jinx to react badly and he thought he had prepared himself for the reaction it still hurt. The one person he never wanted to look at him like a killer or a horrible monster was Jinx and he had tried so hard to keep that part of him, the horseman of war, kept locked as far away from Jinx and his family as possible, but now it was the elephant in the room he could no longer hide. The fact was that he was a monster and a murder, a cold blooded killer, made so by specific design. Of course nothing could prepare you for someone you cared about finally seeing that side of you. He was pretty sure by Jinx’s reaction that this was the end of them too. Jinx wouldn’t be able to forgive him for this. His eyes shifted to the ground. He understood Jinx’s reaction. It hurt but he understood. So to say he was surprised by what Jinx did next would have been an understatement. His eyes widened as Jinx’s soft tiny hands touched his face. * Jinx…* He reached out and touched one of Jinx’s hands and for the first time since coming under Alice’s control his shadows did something subconsciously. They did what he had always worked so hard for them to do, protect the people he cared about. For the first time in a long time his being, the true heart of who he was came through in his shadows. Shadow tendrils wrapped around Jinx’s hands thinning out to form gloves to protect his hands and offering them consistent feeling of coolness. Broken smiled for the first time since being back.* Thank you my little black bird. What would I do without you *he gently moved some of Jinx’s hair behind his ear.* I love you and I’m so glad you’re here. * he touched their foreheads together a thin layer of shadow forming where their skin touched so he didn’t hurt Jinx but so that they could still touch.*
{Drama! Whoot-whoot!! Lol…the best part of having Oc’s is the trouble we can get them into XD Oh my gosh these two are so cute right now!!!}
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Jinx: *The way Broken said his name sent a shiver through his body and made his chest tighten with something he didn't think he had ever felt before. It felt a little like sadness, but stronger, deeper than that. He had no words to describe it, but he did know that it made him want to cry. He wanted to so badly, and though his eyes welled with tears, he wouldn't let them fall. Not this time. He braced himself for the pain when he felt Broken move his hand. He would let himself pull away or flinch at his touch. Broken needed him and he wasn't going to let him down. However, the pain never came. He watched in fascination as Broken's shadows wrapped themselves around his hands. The burning was gone almost instantly, though his hands still felt too hot from the heat that they had already absorbed. However the coolness of the shadow as a welcome change. Seeing Broken smile was equally as welcome, and he returned it shyly, with a small smile of his own. He felt like he hadn't smiled and actually meant it in a very long time .* I-I am sure you would manage with out me. *For a rare moment, both of his eyes were visible as Broken tucked his hair back. Some of it refused to stay where it had been moved and fell back across his eyes, and forehead, though most of it stayed in place.* I am so glad you have returned. I have been so worried about you. *He fell silent for a while, and simply enjoyed being held by the taller man. He had no idea what they would do now. What was going to happen now that so much had changed? What would become of Broken? He was terrified to know the answers to his questions.* H-Have you...*He didn't want to ask this question, but he felt as though he must.* A-Are the others...aware of what has happened? *He hadn't really met the other members of his family yet, so he had know idea how they would take the news, or what they might try to do to Broken. If they were anything like his brothers and sisters, he couldn't imagine that Broken would be very safe here.*
[There's nothing more wonderful then watching a character suffer through something to see how they come out on the other side. It's almost like watching a caterpillar become a butterfly, only more heart-wrenching. Creepy analogies aside, they really are aren't they? <3]
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