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Published: 2003-01-08 03:31:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 14977; Favourites: 199; Downloads: 5574
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A test shot of my current project. What are it's weaknesses?ps. The screens will be filled with graphics.
Made in Cinema4dxl 7.2
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Damn that's exactly what I wanted!
Very nice work!: +fav:
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i think different coloured robotss would be koo, a red and black robot would be very cool.. i love this peice wikid m8. +fav
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Awesome the bots are awesome and the whole render is awsome nice job man
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Looks great, nice clean look (which is what the future should be like). Only thing i can think of is alot of clones...
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i've allready comented on this but i was wondering if u could ( please ) send me a .c4d file with a robot. i am trully fascinated by these bot's and they inspired me so much that i may quit abstract and start modeling bot's.. bu i have no idea on how to build some parts.. if u could help me on that i whould be extremelly thankfull. note me back when u can..
Portwolf - Nuno Fernandes
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i like the reflections on the wall and the ground, they are really cool.
my suggestion would be place one of those bigger robots in the back, somewhere between the small ones.
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sorry. also i think maybe having a 'heat blur' underneath the hovering robots to show that they are disruting the air around them just so you can see it is taking energy to be floating as opposed to be on stings or whatever. (i dont know if they are floating due to magnets or whatever but just a suggestion)
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i really think the robots 'eyes' should actually be a light of some sort? like or even a small screen with some type of graphic or whatever. i think the current orange reflection? kinda looks off? but the rest is absolutly unreal mate. watching your work and characters evolve over the last couple years has been awsome!
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The render is very nice, but even though the lighting on the surfaces is great, the lights themselves aren't visible in the ceiling or anything that looks like an illumination source. Other than that, jack up your AA a little more for a final render and it looks awesome.
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I love this work...its so cool.....I cant wait to see the finished product
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Missing shadow off the big robot in the middle
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they all need to be doing something specific, that or locked in a station and idle
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if the screens are filled with graphics the light reflections on the robots might not be white
yeah
kudos
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i like everything. can't wait to see a final version
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the robot in thin air needs work, hard to tell what hes doing
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Great work! The one big thing i see (though soembody may have posted it) is the inconsistency in the shadows. some are reflective, some are normal dark shadows, and some are both. The reflective is of course harder to do, but it adds a lot more to the picture than normal shadows, and i cant recall seeing reflections and shadows on top of them. Keep up the reflections, but make them a lot darker for the shadowed effect.
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Wow this is insanely nice !
I notice the top looks kinda blur, maybe u can work on it.
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this is cool, but lets hope robots dont live like this in the future...the end of man kind would beinevitable..
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Great work, no wonder it gets all that attention, it's neat and simple and realistic, HDRI perhaps ?!
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are you serious that this isnt even your final and you got a dd?? wow lol i cant wait to see the final, pretty good on this though the robot and back look a bit blurry and not as realistic
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This is a great piece.
I love the reflection off the floor.
You could add different color, size, and shape robots (if the color goes with your theme).
The ceiling is fine, maybe adding more pipes if necessary, but they dont have to drop down, they can be straight, like they are.
D watch
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very well done and interresting. love the robot design. Congrats on the daily feature
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The little guys watching the screen in the background.. I think most of them are a little too evenly aligned. Maybe just loosen that up a little.
Otherwise, fucking cool 
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The lighting looks a lil odd coming from the center of the room when there are light fixtures in upper left & right hand corner (Well, I assume they're lights) and tv's give off light too. The wall on the left is the only wall reflecting the room. But hey, none of it is that big of a deal for a picture that's already looking amazing! Beautiful job 
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Looks slick!
work in the ceiling though, compared to the rest it looks fake
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Ahhhh now that is creative.
I love the reflections everything has, makes it look like a very clean place.
+fav
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amazing display of art and the detail is just stunning, its neatness and complexity gives this piece a technological, realistic, clean look, good job!
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Looks very sharp and realistic. I think that by adding graphics to the blank, white screens would make the picture to crowded and draw away from the piece.
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Nice render 
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for as structured and organized everything looks, the angle is really chaotic and whimsicle. Great work on the modelling
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well, this is an incredible work of 3d indeed...
But, i've some critics... The small robots are too much the same, and there are too many of them... I would apply some material to them. And the texture of the tubes doesn't look too well to me. But it's my personal approach to this image.
I really like it, and i LOVE the floor, don't ask me why, it's a feeling.
Good job...
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This is incredible... I love the whole sci-fi feel to it. Very well done. I can't find any "weaknesses" but that's probably because I couldn't even begin to do something like this. Amazing.
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how the hell...?!
that is incredible.
lovely design and modeling.. great idea, too.. i want one of those, but then would that mean i'm just plain lazy? lol.
great job man.
mP
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