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Eneome — The Thought by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-11-09 21:20:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Hold my hand,
Be my guard,
Walk around
My broken heart.
Tell me you
won't understand,
Lay my life
Down in the sand.
Sing a song,
Harmonize,
Now try the truth
on for size.
Slide your arms
into the sleeves,
Rake me up
Like crumpled leaves.
Lie to me,
Smile please,
Make me think
I love the sea.
Throw me in,
Let me try,
I can't swim,
I told a lie.
I'm sorry that
You did not know,
But I'm not sorry
I had to go.
I'm sorry that you
Caught me
And you held me
With a frown...
But actually
I'm sorry
That you didn't let me drown.
Now try the truth
On for size,
Why did you save me
From the sky?
I'd rather be
Up there than here...
Now throw me in the sea, my dear.
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Comments: 6

LeviSei [2010-11-10 06:54:26 +0000 UTC]

I liked it, haha. Not very random, though. Random would be a poem like, "HEY MAN I LIKE SKUNKS AND FRUIT LOOPS"

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Eneome In reply to LeviSei [2010-11-12 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAA OMG DEG YOU CRACK ME UP! "I like SKUNKS AND FRUIT LOOPSEH"

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LeviSei In reply to Eneome [2010-11-12 17:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Okay here's my poem TOTALLY OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD OKAY HERE GOES.

I like skunks and fruit, LOOPS!
but I don't think they'd be good, TOGETHER!
because I'd be eating, THE LOOPS!
and then I'd smell that wily, SKUNK!
and then I might just have to, PUKE. THE. LOOPS!
and that would ruin my daaaaaaaay!

okay so that was more like a song than a poem but still.

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LeyK-63 [2010-11-09 21:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Its beautiful, i love it

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Eneome In reply to LeyK-63 [2010-11-09 21:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! That just made my day, haha. I didn't think anybody would look at it, but that just totally made me smile. ^_^

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LeyK-63 In reply to Eneome [2010-11-09 23:56:01 +0000 UTC]

aww, its my pleasure!

I dont ever get comments on my deviants so i feel good commenting on others' work.

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