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Published: 2016-11-13 16:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1126; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 0
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I decided to redraw this drawing I made back at the beginning of 2016:It's the same base concept but I changed some things there and there~
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I love this piece it looks wonderful and catching my attention. But, if you would like me to give some critique I think the flame on her hands could've been better improved as in making them a bit transparent to add more definition. The background seems a little rushed but that's alright considering you want eyes on her and not the background. The mouth I believe would've made a difference but I'm guessing it's a more softer look for her. There is rain on the background but it doesn't seem to indicate that she is underneath it or at least shaded by something, it could throw some people off just a bit. Unless her powers make it so the rain doesn't effect her, witch would make sense. I know I may be repeating myself but this piece is just amazing, keep drawing artists always improve everyday.<3
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Thank you for taking your time to do this critique <3
It helps me a lot ^^
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No prob bob I've seen your older works and your improvement scares me I'm so happy to see you improve greatly please keep it up~
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this is a beautiful piece! i love what you did with the shading and the facial features and expression are very nicely done. i also think the effects on the blue flames and the yellow sparkles by her left eye add very much to this work! i also think you have improved very greatly from your last work! and i think if you were to add the spirit like creatures from your last piece onto this one, it would be even better than it already is! i would also recommend changing up the left hand a little, because the pose looked a little unclear and i almost mistook it for a different looking pose. (it kind of looked like it was directly to the side instead of a 3/4 angle. but other than that, this is a really lovely work!
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Thank you a lot for taking the time to this critique and giving pieces of advice! It's really helping
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your welcome! since i don't have a core membership and cant get any critiques, i may as well critique some others works instead! 
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wow amazing improvement! I love this art style so much the lighting is amazing
//do u do commissions or art trades??? Like seriously I just found you and im super in love with your art already. sorry if Im a creep whoops//
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Thank you a lot for the kind words!
Yes, I do commission/request (not art trades yet sorry) but it will really depend on the request ^^
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This...is...'enchanting'. XD
Yeah, the word totally fit for this amazing work.
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joli!
les effets sur l'or et les yeux sont vraiment classes!
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Merci beaucoup! ^^ (Et aussi merci pour le watch~ )
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la composition est super , j'aime particulièrement les effets de l'or
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Wow! Amélioration sur le turbo! Continue sur cette voie!
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Merci, ça fait plaisir! ^^
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Damn on peut vraiment voir que tu as fait beaucoup de progrès! C'est superbe!
Encore un magnifique dessin de ta part! ^^
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Merci beaucoup ça fait plaisir
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