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Published: 2004-03-09 13:46:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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stains uponan empty space
theyll be here forever
cut down to size
synthetic dreams
push deep
and start it bleeding
the emerald eyes
that shine so powerfully
to bring me to my knees
fallen to grace
in my discrace
oh see how i have fallen
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Again, these are powerful words. Nicely put together, though they could use a little more flow.
.....What disgrace? Everything about you is beautiful.
By the way, after it appeared in two of the poems, i had to look up emerald to see what colour it was. Jewels aren't really my forte.
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