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Published: 2004-03-02 20:07:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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drawn to you from the depths of your eyescut inside by promise and lies
i dedicated myself to you
pulled down by a rose
petals blushed with passion
and thorns to cut
smearing the blood
and leaving scars on my mind
to never heal and never fade
and never leave behind
struggling to ever be free
of my petal and thorn
alluring in her everyway
and now my heart is scorned
from years of toil and sweat and tears
you neve could love me
and now im trapped inside my mind
waiting for you to set me free
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wowsie i never commented on this causey i wasnt on deviant arty at the time, but tis so pretty, and so... wordy that i cant remeber, but ummm yah! alluring is a good thing. ALLURRRRRRING. soo prettyful
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This one is definitely full of emotion... You don't need anything but the words to have the feeling of desperation yourself.
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Well written indeed. I can see what this refers too, as I know your feelings on the subject, and it synopsises it well.
Looking forward to the completed version.
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thanks, its my first peice ive put up, and i already scewed it up, so ill be editing it soon, so i can actually give you guys the full on pretention!
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Heh, sounds good to me
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