Comments: 59
Boy-Strange [2004-12-08 16:47:11 +0000 UTC]
That really is brilliant!
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KerouacAttack [2004-11-20 23:25:17 +0000 UTC]
Right on cousin! But you forgot Naked Lunch.
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BonesOfSin [2004-11-08 00:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Good feelings. Very well writen. I love the point. Bravo.
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masonice [2004-01-02 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]
nice
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evilmacca [2003-12-23 13:10:15 +0000 UTC]
nice comment on censorship, the style gets abit repetitive towards the end tho. good job overall tho.
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Dragoon-Fyre [2003-12-22 20:46:08 +0000 UTC]
this is in reallity the best thing i hvae ever read in my life, honestly, full of emotion, my god that was beautiful, i literaly almost cried, to you i say great work +fav
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drippingblood In reply to suzums [2003-12-16 02:09:08 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much. although i have always thought it did need some work
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OverlordQ [2003-11-21 21:08:45 +0000 UTC]
*cough*1984 *cough*
Good read though.
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dloran [2003-06-16 03:06:38 +0000 UTC]
This poem made what was wrong the world all come rushing back to me. Be your own person, America, or be a people magazine cutout. Your poem is one of the more enlightening things i have ever seen. Just compacts all the news we forget in a 30 minute cram of local news whats wrong with the world.
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missingmylife [2003-04-09 14:12:21 +0000 UTC]
You sound so pissed, so full o rage. This is an amazing piece of work. IT is full of emotion and is all true.
Ringraziarlo per le sue parole
Thank you for your words
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seantrani [2003-04-09 05:54:52 +0000 UTC]
good shit. but the "I rember" is much better than the obvious ranting in the second half. It's almost two piece's stapled together. it's very powerful but the strength really resides in the "I remember" I wouldn't publish it as a single piece. split that up. censoring yourself helps sometimes.
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xxxxxx [2003-04-05 23:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Strong, I like it.
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echo-si [2003-03-30 02:01:19 +0000 UTC]
makes me so angry I could cry...
brilliant work, truly.
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wu-wei [2003-02-24 20:49:57 +0000 UTC]
I don't think I have much to add to what's already been said. I loved the powerful emotion in this.
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desaparecidita [2003-02-09 19:03:55 +0000 UTC]
oh that was wonderful. i love it.
i espeically liked
censor the I have witnessed,
censor the Charlie,
censor the common ground
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foxboy [2003-02-02 20:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Amazing poem. you've said in only a matter of lines what I have been trying to explain over years of debates. I commend you. Thank you, thank you for writing this.
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dusterx [2003-01-12 20:41:38 +0000 UTC]
too true...
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himynameiznate [2003-01-10 00:50:30 +0000 UTC]
I think censorship is a bit hated for some reason, and while censorship can be bad, it can be good as well. People should self censor, and definately should censor what they allow their children to read and see.
If that includes banning books in high schools, banning music, banning anything, then I think that is fine, IF that is what the people want. Censorship is only a problem when it is forced upon people by the government.
I see no problem with it if people, or a community, or even a nation censor materials themselves. To make the argument that nothing should be censored would be quite stupid, because even this site, no doubt even you, feel that child pornography shouldnt be allowed.
If a community does not want "Daddys Roommate" available at their school library, they should have that freedom.
Children, even high school children, many times want what is not best for them, and I will attest to this from personal experience. If youre 18, I would say youre accountable for yourself, but if you are a minor, then I would have to say, deal with the rules.
Anyways, thats my rant.
I did like this, however, because it didnt pander to any particular ideology, and instead showed how they all are censored at one time or another.
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derghaust [2003-01-10 00:36:09 +0000 UTC]
Only criticism I have about this is that it is showing how, at times, ideas which are now popular were censored. The truly important aspect of censorship, in my mind, is the protection of the unpopular idea. It is the hardest to achieve but most essential and defining part of the fight against censorship. If you want to read about some incredibly unpopular ideas that have been effectively censored over the years, I have a terribly-written but somewhat informative post right here: [link]
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atomitron [2003-01-09 03:19:01 +0000 UTC]
Extremely emotive...
You are able to craft your words to allow the reader to feel what you are feeling....
Very nice work...
Sorry I havnt been around to comment, I will try and catch up..
:: atom ::
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antigrrl [2003-01-08 03:29:14 +0000 UTC]
genuinely expressive.
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emulated-human [2003-01-07 23:35:30 +0000 UTC]
whoa, you really covered it all. excellent job man. i like this a lot. The CIA actually has a file on system of a down's lead singer, serj tankian. good work.
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traerene [2003-01-07 02:07:06 +0000 UTC]
goddamm...that was powerful and full of emotion, and it kicked me square in the ass. i really enjoyed reading that!
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r-sandbox [2003-01-06 08:11:19 +0000 UTC]
great work.
+fav
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filibustered [2003-01-06 06:50:01 +0000 UTC]
yeah! go you.
i like the agressive sarcastic edge this poem takes on a subject that is so important to me as well. that's a nice thumb for it too; those are some of the most evocative photos ever taken.
great job,
--filibustered
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push- [2003-01-06 02:04:04 +0000 UTC]
it is beautiful as you are . this entire piece was a perfection inside of itself..I don't even know what to say, just that i fav'd it.
awesome words that flowed within your thoughts onto this piece is beautiful.
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fauxgravity [2003-01-05 11:30:51 +0000 UTC]
i usually have nothing to say on 'issue rants' because i think it's all pretty plain to see. everything is subjective and whether i agree with you or not, i thoroughly laud the speaking of minds. however, i thought this was fabulously done. it was fucking emotive, and i wanted to congratulate you on tackling this over0tackled subject so well.
i also urge you to continue along the line of color by replacing 'the expression of my words' with 'the color of my words'
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infiltrator15 [2003-01-05 07:44:55 +0000 UTC]
well you definitely made your point!
well done, well put, nothing more to say.
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crimsonlarko [2003-01-05 06:25:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is amazing. I love the abstract structure. Well done.
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gabrieli [2003-01-05 06:01:39 +0000 UTC]
wonderful walk down the historical path of censorship...really brings certain issues home, and makes us re-examine our views, thoughts, relationship to these issues. really strong piece. great job.
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michaeltoe [2003-01-05 02:34:19 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, the bible is kind of lame...
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utro [2003-01-05 00:20:48 +0000 UTC]
i disagree with ~mrjohnson . the last line is powerful and ties in the beginning of the list.
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mrjohnson [2003-01-04 23:51:25 +0000 UTC]
You dont need that last line.
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