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Description Expectance of defeat
waiting for the wrong
knowing from my history
and the fulfillment of this dread
filling me with anger
completion of despair
a dissappointment bought
by those who call me loved
and the reactions of my heart
circumstance beyond control
and the
judgement
is
fulfilled...
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Comments: 12

thewretchd [2004-07-03 06:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Not a word wasted. In this piece, you sound so modest in accepting defeat or loss. It's a feeling felt by many but I've never really seen it expressed as well as you did. cheers.

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drd69 In reply to thewretchd [2004-07-08 23:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, it means a lot that people can read this and agree, can feel from their own hearts and are bothered enough to tell me.

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Annida [2004-04-30 09:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional poem. I can understand it.. as if you expected something that always seems to happen. well, I mean duh, that's really what it does say. I don't know..

Have hope for the future
for it was not meant to be.
God has a plan
For everyone, even you and me.

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drd69 In reply to Annida [2004-04-30 10:58:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm just not sure I want to kniw what god's plan is for me!

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Annida In reply to drd69 [2004-04-30 11:45:15 +0000 UTC]

s'all good!

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africassky [2004-04-26 10:29:05 +0000 UTC]

the state i'm in today means this has just cut a gaping great hole somewhere where i think my heart should be. this is how i have felt for so long now, just could never have said it so well.

the emotion is so strong and the way it haltingly comes out is how i imagine you would actually say it if i were infront of you.

its beautiful


i hope your smiling. x

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drd69 In reply to africassky [2004-04-26 14:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

The way you've seen it is exactly how I wanted it to be understood, so thank you for understanding.

It's just me.

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rubenesque [2004-04-19 20:41:17 +0000 UTC]

I like it just the way it sounds - as if you wrote as the words stumbled out of your heart.

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drd69 In reply to rubenesque [2004-04-19 21:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. They did!

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rubenesque [2004-04-19 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]

I like it just the ay it sounds - as if you r wrote as the words stumbled out of your heart.

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gyroscope [2004-04-19 18:11:44 +0000 UTC]

i think this could stand to be paced better, if i can say that about a poem.

i always love the emotions in your poetry.

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drd69 In reply to gyroscope [2004-04-19 19:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I see what you mean, I made a couple of errors when typing, but the edit function on DA isn't working properly atm!

Thanks mate.

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