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Tenshi-ar [2014-10-08 13:39:34 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!
You have such a beautiful heart!!
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NattyBeatlePaulLover [2013-04-27 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]
That was so beautiful, I'm getting teary eyed. So beautiful
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kedonsine [2012-06-19 01:46:30 +0000 UTC]
beautiful :bravo:
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avidec [2012-01-01 20:17:02 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Seriously, I like it very much! ^^
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Dancing-Kiwi [2011-08-19 23:10:47 +0000 UTC]
I can relate to this poem so very well. I love the way you wrote it, how it's simple, quite easy to you know, understand, and it's full of emotion so many girls must feel each night before they go to bed.
I MUST write the other half to this!
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reckotch [2011-07-20 21:33:47 +0000 UTC]
it's so cute! verywell done!
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KomoLove [2011-07-19 06:23:00 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much. I really feel like I can relate and its just great!
Great job I loved every line of it, keep writing, you're great lol
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becursed [2011-06-30 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]
Awww...
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an0ny1 [2011-04-24 12:19:22 +0000 UTC]
there is one similar post here, claiming to be original...
[link]
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SpazzinYazz [2011-04-09 15:51:25 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOO your writing made me stare at the end like a lozer i want you to finish it but its really great
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ohyescesc [2011-04-07 23:36:49 +0000 UTC]
Hi you should join our group called love for the lovers! we'd love to see your poetry in our galleries. Check out the poetry contest and glance over the rules. Hope you join! [link]
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AdilaRain [2011-04-03 23:17:38 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
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leonelmail [2011-03-24 18:24:11 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS O_____________O♥
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Blind0ptimism [2011-03-03 10:05:51 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap! That was SOOOOOOOO good! I didn't really expect it to be that good when i clicked on it, but glad you proved me wrong!
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little-wild-one [2011-02-20 19:04:17 +0000 UTC]
WOW I'm not usually into poems but this one is brilliant! I love the ending, I really wasn't expecting it!
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M-Hunter006 [2011-01-04 00:10:01 +0000 UTC]
That was utterly fantastic. I've never seen such poetry. Being the writing fan I am, for me to not have a negative comment is saying something. This is perfection at it's finest.
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doorfromheaven In reply to MysticLotus [2010-11-15 19:58:58 +0000 UTC]
I think love lasts longer when the ending is left open... when you start planning out everything... things seem to be forgotten...
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Angelisse [2010-09-15 18:28:41 +0000 UTC]
i favorited this years ago, and i probably commented before too...but i still read this and get chills at the end...
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MarcoDelMarco [2010-08-26 20:18:30 +0000 UTC]
*whips away tear*
That was soooo sweet! I've thought about that too, I think we all have. Great view into the human condition.
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lululittleapple [2010-07-19 23:43:58 +0000 UTC]
the most beatiful poem ever!
is perfect...
i love it
awsome, cool, romatic, natural, real....
just the best
<3 <3 <3
congratulations !!! good job! <3
hahaha
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Sora81 [2010-07-12 12:16:27 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, it truely did touch my heart!
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okamiv [2010-06-15 03:01:44 +0000 UTC]
this story is so beautiful!
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TMCanada [2010-06-13 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Actually I think it is perfect ending there. No need for anything else. This was such a lovely poem.
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SH79 [2010-06-01 11:54:36 +0000 UTC]
What beautiful poem from deep within your soul, how I wish I also holds.
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nartox101 [2010-05-30 02:59:55 +0000 UTC]
omg......that is beautiful!!!
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Dani-the-Naiad [2010-05-03 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool!
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DMA2Superman [2010-03-21 06:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Unfreakin' Believable! I know you wrote this years ago, so I have to ask, did you find him and what made it so? This poem is phenomenal and I think truly is timeless and anyone who ever wondered where the love of their lives was at before they met or anything about them or when and how it would ignite will connect to this on a level that wil touch their soul until they find that love. Great job, I hope you found that love you wrote to years ago, from this letter in 2007 your heart was more than ready to start your eternity.
You have a gift, thank you for sharing it with us, we are better for it.
Take care, Don
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Kayla-Kun-31592 [2009-12-04 22:17:55 +0000 UTC]
This is really cute, and I kinda like how it ends even though I don't like open ended endings. It is really sweet.
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doorfromheaven In reply to Kayla-Kun-31592 [2009-12-30 23:39:22 +0000 UTC]
well, it was for a contest, long long ago, when I was truly speaking out for someone to love....and my story had currently been unwritten...
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aibashi [2009-11-10 11:36:32 +0000 UTC]
omg i loved this so much... skdjflsdf
;(
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