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Published: 2007-06-30 03:24:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 36756; Favourites: 863; Downloads: 233
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Description Hey Future Love,

I didn’t know how to start this letter
Dear, or hello, couldn’t decide which sound better.
I went for the informal because I’m not trying to impress
Try to make it laid back so there’s no need to stress.
I know I don’t know your name—but someday I hope
We’ll meet on the street and no longer be alone.
Sometimes I gaze up at the stars and imagine how it will be—
Where will it happen? Will you just turn and look at me?
Will we discover the meaning of “love at first sight?”
Perhaps it will take one or two nights—
Laying out under the stars and discovering the mysteries
Asking questions that have eluded the minds of many for centuries.
Maybe it will be our laughter that floats in the air—
That makes us turn in the right direction, at that moment, right there.
Our eyes will meet, and it will be just like in a movie
We’ll smile at each other, and you’ll ask me out for a cup of coffee.
Oh the possibilities, they haunt me in my sleep
All the secrets I want to share but for now I keep.
Each poem I write makes me somehow feel closer to you
Based on emotions that I know to be true.
When life gets me down, I look up at the night sky
For a long moment, I’m silent but eventually I’ll sigh—
Someday we’ll meet, and it’ll be like we had never been apart
Because you know when you’ve found the one
That completes your heart.



I look at the letter, tears roll down my cheeks
I rest my head on my pillow, and try to sleep.
Slowly the letter slips from my hands—
Tumbles to the ground, but the wind has other plans.
Out the window, it soars through the night
Travels the world in its magnificent flight—
And gets caught in a branch, outside his room;
Where inside he is dreaming of the love to come soon.
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Comments: 329

Tenshi-ar [2014-10-08 13:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!

You have such a beautiful heart!!

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snowywolf7 [2014-07-27 10:25:54 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful, amazing, and inspiring.

I'm waiting for God to send me the one He made specially for me. My eternal mate.

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NattyBeatlePaulLover [2013-04-27 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]

That was so beautiful, I'm getting teary eyed. So beautiful

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kedonsine [2012-06-19 01:46:30 +0000 UTC]

beautiful :bravo:

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avidec [2012-01-01 20:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! Seriously, I like it very much! ^^

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Dancing-Kiwi [2011-08-19 23:10:47 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this poem so very well. I love the way you wrote it, how it's simple, quite easy to you know, understand, and it's full of emotion so many girls must feel each night before they go to bed.
I MUST write the other half to this!

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reckotch [2011-07-20 21:33:47 +0000 UTC]

it's so cute! verywell done!

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0Apeiron0 [2011-07-20 16:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful piece, very well written

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KomoLove [2011-07-19 06:23:00 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much. I really feel like I can relate and its just great!
Great job I loved every line of it, keep writing, you're great lol

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AmsilHobbes [2011-07-02 03:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwhhhhh!!! So adorable!

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becursed [2011-06-30 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Awww...

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artorifreedom [2011-06-14 12:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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an0ny1 [2011-04-24 12:19:22 +0000 UTC]

there is one similar post here, claiming to be original...

[link]

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doorfromheaven In reply to an0ny1 [2011-04-25 15:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for pointing this out to me. I have contacted the writer of the blog in hope to receive some sort of credit. It's kinda hard to be the original when he posted it three years after I wrote it

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SpazzinYazz [2011-04-09 15:51:25 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOO your writing made me stare at the end like a lozer i want you to finish it but its really great

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ohyescesc [2011-04-07 23:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Hi you should join our group called love for the lovers! we'd love to see your poetry in our galleries. Check out the poetry contest and glance over the rules. Hope you join! [link]

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AdilaRain [2011-04-03 23:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Well done!

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leonelmail [2011-03-24 18:24:11 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS O_____________O♥

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Blind0ptimism [2011-03-03 10:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap! That was SOOOOOOOO good! I didn't really expect it to be that good when i clicked on it, but glad you proved me wrong!

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little-wild-one [2011-02-20 19:04:17 +0000 UTC]

WOW I'm not usually into poems but this one is brilliant! I love the ending, I really wasn't expecting it!

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love-save-the-empty [2011-01-25 19:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I like the rhyming and the story. Also, I think the ending fits. Whatever happens after that is another story.

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Cheshire-Kitty65 [2011-01-08 00:40:55 +0000 UTC]

This defines me so well.
Just dreaming of that special someone..
very,very awesome job here. I love how you can make it ryhme, as well.
I cant find words.

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M-Hunter006 [2011-01-04 00:10:01 +0000 UTC]

That was utterly fantastic. I've never seen such poetry. Being the writing fan I am, for me to not have a negative comment is saying something. This is perfection at it's finest.

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Sarah-the-writer [2010-12-31 21:23:53 +0000 UTC]

This is great! Cool idea, very sweet Hope to see you around my gallery/blog soon. Best of writing luck and happy new year

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MysticLotus [2010-11-15 08:02:03 +0000 UTC]

You know, I really don't want to change anything about this. I love the incomplete ending... just makes you pine for more with the satisfaction that these emotions are running with the current... if that makes any sense.

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doorfromheaven In reply to MysticLotus [2010-11-15 19:58:58 +0000 UTC]

I think love lasts longer when the ending is left open... when you start planning out everything... things seem to be forgotten...

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TheNirvanaTheory [2010-10-28 03:52:18 +0000 UTC]

haha i thought it was just me who thought like that. The amount of times ive been like 'wow, im such a saddo'.. thinking, he's out there, but when!???
Now i feel way more hopeful
Beautiful poem!

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mikkokusha [2010-10-20 03:32:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this
it reminds me of my lover ♥

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TackyloveApple [2010-10-07 01:54:21 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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Angelisse [2010-09-15 18:28:41 +0000 UTC]

i favorited this years ago, and i probably commented before too...but i still read this and get chills at the end...

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MarcoDelMarco [2010-08-26 20:18:30 +0000 UTC]

*whips away tear*
That was soooo sweet! I've thought about that too, I think we all have. Great view into the human condition.

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lululittleapple [2010-07-19 23:43:58 +0000 UTC]

the most beatiful poem ever!
is perfect...
i love it
awsome, cool, romatic, natural, real....
just the best
<3 <3 <3

congratulations !!! good job! <3
hahaha

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Sora81 [2010-07-12 12:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, it truely did touch my heart!

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Sully-Bean [2010-07-10 21:47:17 +0000 UTC]

this is lovely, charming, wonderful

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lululittleapple [2010-07-07 22:01:53 +0000 UTC]

beatiuful!!!!!

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muskaan786 [2010-06-21 02:05:37 +0000 UTC]

wow this is sooo beautiful and creative. i myself love writing poems, but i doubt i could ever come up with something as original as this! i love how the words are so simple and strong at the same time. great job

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okamiv [2010-06-15 03:01:44 +0000 UTC]

this story is so beautiful!

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TMCanada [2010-06-13 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Actually I think it is perfect ending there. No need for anything else. This was such a lovely poem.

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Heatherbabyyx [2010-06-05 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AWESOMEEEE yourr a realllyy goood writer

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SH79 [2010-06-01 11:54:36 +0000 UTC]

What beautiful poem from deep within your soul, how I wish I also holds.

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nartox101 [2010-05-30 02:59:55 +0000 UTC]

omg......that is beautiful!!!

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Dani-the-Naiad [2010-05-03 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool!

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DMA2Superman [2010-03-21 06:21:42 +0000 UTC]

Unfreakin' Believable! I know you wrote this years ago, so I have to ask, did you find him and what made it so? This poem is phenomenal and I think truly is timeless and anyone who ever wondered where the love of their lives was at before they met or anything about them or when and how it would ignite will connect to this on a level that wil touch their soul until they find that love. Great job, I hope you found that love you wrote to years ago, from this letter in 2007 your heart was more than ready to start your eternity.

You have a gift, thank you for sharing it with us, we are better for it.

Take care, Don

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doorfromheaven In reply to DMA2Superman [2010-03-22 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! This poem is definitely one of my favorites--it seems like I wrote all my best stuff so early on and now I am lucky to write something that at least makes sense But I have found 'him,' actually. And it was actually thanks to this site here. it's as if my letter traveled through the internet and drew him to me. We now share an apartment, have an awesome kitty, and I am just trying to live the dream. But this is certainly something that I thought about a lot... I always knew my love was not going to ignite in high school drama. This man is going to be my first kiss and my last.

Thank you for your comment. It truly caught my eye and my heart <3

You take care as well!

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Sheen-Teen [2010-02-22 01:31:52 +0000 UTC]

words can't even describe how beautiful this is

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desertrose89 [2010-02-17 10:04:52 +0000 UTC]

I feel like i can relate to this. wow. I feel the same way and its a really nice poem.

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Kayla-Kun-31592 [2009-12-04 22:17:55 +0000 UTC]

This is really cute, and I kinda like how it ends even though I don't like open ended endings. It is really sweet.

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doorfromheaven In reply to Kayla-Kun-31592 [2009-12-30 23:39:22 +0000 UTC]

well, it was for a contest, long long ago, when I was truly speaking out for someone to love....and my story had currently been unwritten...

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TheGrCornholio [2009-11-25 22:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Meaby too predictable. Like in a movie just like you sayed in your poem. Then there is too much coing on like the stars, meeting in the streets and then the dreams. Meaby if you would concentrate more deeply in one thing like the dreaming for example. Now I'm just telling you what to write even tough you are way better than I would ever be. I'm just too tired to write my own so I make others do them for me.

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aibashi [2009-11-10 11:36:32 +0000 UTC]

omg i loved this so much... skdjflsdf
;(

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