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Published: 2005-08-17 13:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2217; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 281
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EDITSorry for the resubmission - I edited the bg a bit....ermm...not sure if this is better or plain white.. X___X what do you think? Alse tweaked the skirt a little....
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Well, based on feedback and critiques I got from the previous Avy design, I redid it - this time, a better pose (I hope, cause it was haaaard getting the anatomy just right for this pose X___X) and better colours I hope. Hee hee, you've seen her front, back view this time!
I changed her hair to a darker, more grayish, blueish, greenish tinge, changed her shoes (I thought the previous ones look clunky, and these look more feminine
), enhanced her inner armour cause it couldn't really be seen before, and added that prettifull shoulder armour thingy as well.She's supposed to look strong but feminine, does she look that to you? X__X The wing things are still there, I just didn't draw them in this picture.
AND PLEASE I don't know what colour background to put... X____X Help me!!! What colour background would you think go with it? White brings out the colour, but I'm scared it will look too plain??
What do you think?? Let me know!!!Please, any critiques are welcome!!!
(I hope my team will accept this design. X___X)
(Put in fantasy category cause she's not human)
(ohhh I have about 8 more characters to do....busy busy busy... X___X forgive me if I'm a bit inactive on dA...so busy.. X__X)
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Comments: 98
You are soo talented at drawing is scares me, anyhow lovely design and outstanding work on the lineart and the colouring, I love the concept.
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Thanks so much!
Which reminds me that I still owe you a drawing! 
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oh, and yes, she does look strong and feminine
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her ears are funny xD like a mix of fin-ears and butterfly-shape... I like them 
your way of coloring hair is gorgeous, not too sure about the folds though... I think it would look better if you kept the cell-shading on them too.
nice work ^^
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Thank you very much. ^^ I'm not a huge fan of cell-shading, I've always been more of a painter person, but I appreciate your helpful comments and crits so much! 
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it doesn't really show that you don't like cell-shading o_O It looks so good... I wanted to do it one time because I like good cell-shading (see =nyanko-chan for example) but I found out it's too hard for me and I'm more the painter/airbrush/whatever type. It's way easier to me o_O
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Wow, another great character design. This one is even prettier
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your designs are just so nice T___T
i wish i had an imagination like you..
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I like her design including her outfit. I love her hair and the pose is awesome. You color very nicely. *_* She looks very cool.
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WAaah! She's very pretty 
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I really like all the patterns all over her clothes!
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Aww thank you~
Your colouring is good too!! *^__^*
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OMG Dominque! This is so beautiful! 
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Oooh thank you!!! 
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I really really like her your so talented.
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Thanks so much!
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OMG! Lovely!!!
Ahem...well, she looks pretty strong-willed to me, if not physically. I love how you colour this pic, and I think the colours are fine as it is. Everything goes with one another 
I hope your team will acept this design. If not, I'm sorry to say, they're blind
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Thank you so much!!!
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Oh wow...
I can't believe I haven't added artist like you
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oh lush! its flows so well *o* and the shine on the hair is well pretty. she looks strong willed and beautiful ^3^
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Heehehe thank you so much!! 
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Nah, bagus ini.
I like the snow that you added in this pic. Really great. Oh, and why don't you outline the skirt?
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ehehehe...I did but someone said it looked too stiff and plastic..so I erased the outline!
Terima kasih banyak!!!
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COOL~ i like the colour u using in this one~ very nice~ and name avy again XD~
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LoL...yup, its her again XDD
Thank you!
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wow, she's beautiful!! I love the colours you used, though the costume is a little reminiscent of Yuna's songstress dress sphere
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Lmao...why does so many people say that? X__X I didn't even think of the songstress sphere...*sigh* oh well..
thank you!
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Oooo... pretty! She's really gorgeous! (and since I'm so lazy, I have to comment on the earlier version too...
The thing that really has me wow-ed is the pose though. It's simple, yet... em.. somehow, I know I would never have thought of it. Love everything about the design (especially the ears!).
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Aww thanks so much for commenting on both! I appreciate it heaps! Yea I like the wing things too, but I was just too lazy to draw them in this.
Thanks so much!!
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Still very pretty with nice details. I miss her wing though.
Booty crack! *falls over giggling like a grade schooler* okay I'm done.
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LMAO!!! SO IMMATUER/!!!11!11!!!!
Heheh....her wing is still there, but I just didn't draw it in.
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I certainly thinks she looks strong but feminine. Her armor is so beautifully detailed! I love how it matches her shoes. It gives an impression of "warrior" while still accenting her features so nicely.
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Aww thank you so much!!!
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