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Published: 2017-04-10 17:49:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 2924; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 21
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Description Hello guys here is a great drawing by the every awesome and friendly who graciouslly drawn WW1 carol for me! And with it a nice Vignette of her time in WW1 in her world Ard. Which she and other Colonial forces fought against Ard worlds French Troops.

Her Crucifix looks like this ( www.theblaze.com/wp-content/up… )

Caroline is a heroine and happens before her time in  

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Somewhere in the Western Front, 1918

 

.Bullets burst in the air as a trench raid commences between Sturmtruppen from the German North American Colonies and French troops in a world not our own. We're there is no Great land, no new world, and Giant metal shells burst in the air making heavy raindrops. And the old notion of magic still exists with deadly effect.


Carol now Manfred Holstein leads her first raid. Her heart skips many beats as the day is cloudy enough to keep the plans at bay.


Her job now was to make sure that no one gets killed. She makes a magic comm link so that they can share each other's eyes, and thoughts.


“Es sieht aus wie es zu gehen Regen. (It looks like it's going to rain.)” She remarks adjusting her scarf to keep her neck warm.


She looks up as she makes a motion with her hand. She takes a grenade from her belt, so do the others throwing their grenades into the trench.


Causing magic explosions in the trench spreading ice, and fire. Killing about 4 of the sentries.


The job here is not to take prisoners today but to take this trench, and wait for the main army to relieve them afterward but now they rush the trench.


Carol lets the magic take her over as her Kaiser runes unleash her power enough to destroy a whole trench system of asked to.


She yells “Aux occupants de cette tranchée, rendez-vous et vous serez traités avec honneur et respect! (Occupants of this trench surrender now, and you'll be treated with honor and respect!!””


A bullet whizzes in the middle of her face. Bounced off by the magical barrier protecting as she walks forward sending a communicated to her second in command Adebayo a tall shaved man of Namibian descent, more importantly her "Submachine Gun Artist “Feldwebel!”


Adebayo responds “Jawohl!”


“Bereiten Sie sich! Wir haben zu Erfassung den Graben und der Kommandant! (Prepare yourself! We have to capture the trench and the commander!)”  says Carol as she and a few others follow clearing the trench of its French defenders. With bullets impacting the barrier not penetrating, at the same time reducing her magic reserves, to make her impression of power.


Her weapon her trusty Luger P08. Made with an extra punch, of magic tech. She loads the pistol and takes aim, than fires.


The French soldiers defending to their homeland look at her as her eyes begin to gleam an eerie glow saying “Jetzt Beißt und Essen meine Feinde (Now Bounce and eat my enemies!” discharging bullets into the attackers tearing their bodies apart spreading guts and gore all over the trench.


THe screams of the wounded and the sights don’t bother her anymore only the mission, this mission to defend the Imperial lands.


Working in a machine pace making sure she engaged the enemy, with the aid of a few of her comrades. Using her Beißt bullets to do the bulk of the job in her hunt for the officers of this particular French trench.


After about five minutes trench was theirs, albeit with some slight resistance with most of the soldiers surrendering to the speedy takeover.


Her blood was still pumping, still saw blood, pointing her pistol yelling in French “Les mains en l'air ou vous mourez! (Hands up! Or die!)”


She saw a young man taking something out from his bunk. Carol without thought puts five bullets into him.


The young man drops bleeding out. She walks closer to him wanting to know what he was holding, was it a weapon, a magic tool.


As she walks closer as she moves his hand way seeing a small stuffed animal. She puts up her visor, a bit surprised as she looks at the boy she shot, someone about her age.


Her heart feels heavy, but she can’t show it, so not the discourage her men. Knowing that as the dying boy she was just a child. She picks the bear up feeling the soft plush toy, as the boy gurgles up blood saying “Mère mère…”


Carol is shocked to see that he is alive as she holds out her hand saying “Ja Mutter ist hier. Nicht Sorge. Ich bin hier.” As she hoped to save him this time. Trying to conjure an arch healing spell, trying to take him away from death "Nicht sterbe kleine Junge oder werden nicht können haben Süßigkeiten sein heute Abend. (Do not die little boy or you will not be able to have sweets tonight.)



Her second in command Adebayo comes to her saying “Wir haben Gefangen den Kommandant! Den Schützengraben ist unsere! (We have captured the commander! The trench is Ours!)" as he looks at Carol healing the man.


Adebayo grabs her wrist softly saying “Manfred…. Carol er ist tot.  (Manfred… Carol he's dead).” seeing that the spell didn't work, seeing the dead boys dead body.


Carol doesn’t stop hoping to save him. Adebayo does a more forceful grasp to snap her out “Erspare ihre Energie! Du könntest nicht tue etwas für ihn! (Save your energy! You can’t do anything for him!)


Carol stops, listening to Adebayo’s advice “Euch Recht Adebayo wir müssen halten den Graben bis regelmäßige Truppen zu Entlasten uns (Your right Adebayo .... We must hold the trench until Regular troops relieve us.),


Adebayo nods saying “Jawohl Herr Feldwebel Leutnant.” as He leaves her alone.


Carol slumps to the trench wall as the rain splashes on her helmet holding the stuffed animal a bear. For some reasons tears stream from her eyes saying “Es tut mir Leid. Es tut mir Leid” as she covers the child's face with his coat, and puts the small stuffed animal in her coat. Taking the cross that her mother gave her from under her collar. Having the visage of Jesus on the cross, with its Gold snake chain holding it. Close to her forehead. Trying to communicate to the one up high saying “Es tut mir Leid… Es tut mir Leid (I'm sorry... I'm sorry.)"


The Rain continues looking like it will rain for the rest of the day.


Die Endet.


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Comments: 8

kenfusion45 [2017-04-10 23:38:43 +0000 UTC]

It's a sad story, but well written

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distractthemonster In reply to kenfusion45 [2017-04-11 00:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Ken! Anything you like in Particular? 

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kenfusion45 In reply to distractthemonster [2017-04-11 00:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Nothing in particular.  Just the humanness of the story.

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distractthemonster In reply to kenfusion45 [2017-04-11 15:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Carol (WW1): Danke Stranger :tighthugplz:

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Gregory-GID-DID [2017-04-10 17:59:39 +0000 UTC]

la classe Bravo

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distractthemonster In reply to Gregory-GID-DID [2017-04-11 00:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Merci Beacoup! Any part you like in particular?

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Gregory-GID-DID In reply to distractthemonster [2017-04-11 00:50:27 +0000 UTC]

The party with the child and the teddy bear!
Nice phrases in French!
I correct a little!

" Les occupants de cette tranchée se rendent maintenant, et vous serez traités avec honneur et respect !" = " Aux occupants de cette tranchée, rendez-vous et vous serez traités avec honneur et respect !"
" Les mains en l'air! Ou mourir !" = Les mains en l'air ou vous mourez !"


The French language is hard to learn but you have a good level!


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distractthemonster In reply to Gregory-GID-DID [2017-04-11 01:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I just updated the story! And it was kind of a downer this story.

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