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dinospac — Back to the wild, chapter 3 part 1
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Me and Terry we’re going up the hill until I got hungry very hungry, so did Terry so we decided to go to the water it was a small lake connecting to the ocean me and Terry Tennant know what to expect. I was looking for those red walking things again to eat. I couldn’t find any of them. Terry didn’t know what to eat himself, but he had an idea, so he went off by himself. then it happened a big wave hit me and knock me into the water. I scream and yelp he was gone, and I can’t swim. I hold my breath and drifted to the water. I spotted many strange things like those red things and a thing with many arms and underwater plant life. then I found him he: what are you? Never seen something like you before do you want to play? Oh sorry. Didn’t get your name? mine is other fish what’s yours?.Spiny : um um um um
Other fish : oh what a nice name nice to meet you um um
I turn my eyes at him
I couldn’t do anything I couldn’t move, but somehow I didn’t sink to the bottom yet .
Other fish : oh here comes my big friends and my little friends come on oh our not moving let me help you
He grabbed me by the tail and begin to drag me to the water I begin to pass out, but I constantly think of other things like how annoying this other fish guy is I kept my eyes open. I didn’t understand why I’m not drowning or sinking yet . But I didn’t think about it. I just thought about keeping myself alive until I spotted some strange silver things in a the good thing I didn’t know what it was, but I ignored it.
Until something comes closer to us. It’s starting to come closer and closer whatever it was it wasn’t good. The other creatures were scared of it. It was big and had a white underbelly with sharp teeth that swim closer and closer to us, but I couldn’t do anything .
Other fish: hehe what are doing there buddy? You look like you trying to hurt us? hey, you almost bit me oh no
Other fish and I swim as fast as he could with me he swim as the thing chase us. It is going to kill me. I never going to find out who I am or what I am. I’m gonna die white here things to this idiot we are both going to die now we’re not gonna make it we’re not gonna make it.
Other fish: this is no time to take a nap we got to we got woo big friends came
The 2 big friends chase away the predator other fish: how can I wake up my new buddy? Woo the two. Swim to the surface other fish: oh ok he put her on his back and swim to the surface.
I was dreaming for quite a bit. I couldn’t think of anything didn’t think but I do remember someplace where there’s others like me in a more wet woods.
Strange voice: wake up wake up!
Strange voice : I’m so sorry
I woke up cold and wet on top of other fish. My eyes look to the sun and see Terry and other
So yes, I think this chapter wasn’t as bad as last chapter was another thing as I am splitting it up to two parts because it’s easier the way to follow these characters story I might do this to other chapters as well if this was just a normal book it’ll just be one chapter but yeah. I kind a like the art it looks OK and I like it. It’s in my Pinyan much better.. but I didn’t like how I wrote it kind of bad but hey, not as bad as last chapter. Finally, I felt like this was pretty part 2 is going to be longer, so yeah hope you enjoy. See you later gators
