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Next page, a little flash back into the first few days after Zira and co. were exiled to the Outlands.
I had the worst time getting the termite mounds to look just right. I think I captured them well but I'm not looking forward to drawing mor ein the near future.
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Comments: 28

Jetbourdkid [2014-10-09 12:57:59 +0000 UTC]

your very good at drawing and i love the way your comics look but there a little glich in the 2ed panel

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Devinital-TLK In reply to Jetbourdkid [2014-10-09 17:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Glitch? What glitch?

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Jetbourdkid In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-09 20:09:54 +0000 UTC]

The thick black line over Kovu and  Vitani's eyes is over laping the tuft of hare that hangs in font of their face.

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Devinital-TLK In reply to Jetbourdkid [2014-10-09 23:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh that, that's not a glitch, I was trying out a new style that I've seen in some cartoons. Its were the eyebrow show up throw the hair even when it hand in front of the eyes. Is it distracting?

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Jetbourdkid In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-10 03:15:59 +0000 UTC]

oh okay then, if that's part of your style then okay then. stick with what you like that what I say.

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Devinital-TLK In reply to Jetbourdkid [2014-10-10 04:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for voicing your concern, I appreciate the sentiment.

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SteelJackel [2014-10-08 21:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Your termite mounds are great! When I do the same surfaces (like rocks) it does not turn out good for me. XD
I really like the sunset sky as well! How did you blend the colours so smoothly? I have problems with doing that. XD Keep up the great work!

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Devinital-TLK In reply to SteelJackel [2014-10-09 05:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
I work in Photoshop and there are a lot of blend and gradient effects to work with. Assuming you take the time to learn them, most of it is over three years of practice.

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SteelJackel In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-09 23:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I use Artstudio for IPad. And yes, I do take time to learn art, and I want to go into career with it. It's my main goal!

you're quite welcome too! I can't wait too see more!

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Devinital-TLK In reply to SteelJackel [2014-10-10 00:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. If you need advice, look me up and I'll see what I can do.

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SteelJackel In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-10 00:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll defiantly keep you in mind.

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Madness-Made-Fresh [2014-10-08 19:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Yay more!

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Devinital-TLK In reply to Madness-Made-Fresh [2014-10-09 05:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes and hopefully it will stay that way.

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corruptangel315 [2014-10-08 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Uh... Dev... Not to sound rude, but do you mind if I go ahead and point out the typos/mistakes in the text of this page? No offense, but the errors I see here are ones I know I corrected in the rough draft you sent me... Did you forget to use my edited version, by chance?

Beautiful as always, BTW.

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Devinital-TLK In reply to corruptangel315 [2014-10-09 02:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, it seems Photoshop went through and auto corrected some stuff and changed your edits back to the old version. And not just on this page but the next three or so. I went through and altered again but I'll be keeping an eye on it.

Thanks for telling me. It helps a lot.

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corruptangel315 In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-09 02:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh alright, I was wondering what happened... That's weird. Anyway, no problem. Happy to help, as always. ^^

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Devinital-TLK In reply to corruptangel315 [2014-10-09 05:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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corruptangel315 In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-09 05:10:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem. BTW, not to be a pain, but you might want to add a "we" in the second panel; so it says "back when we were" and not just "back when were", as it does now. ^^

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Devinital-TLK In reply to corruptangel315 [2014-10-09 17:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll go back and fix that later today.

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corruptangel315 In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-09 17:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Okay, cool. And again, sorry to be a pain.

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Devinital-TLK In reply to corruptangel315 [2014-10-09 23:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Not at all, its your job.

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corruptangel315 In reply to Devinital-TLK [2014-10-10 01:23:28 +0000 UTC]

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M-Lee08 [2014-10-08 18:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Here we go the story starts.

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Devinital-TLK In reply to M-Lee08 [2014-10-09 05:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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TLK-JDM [2014-10-08 17:49:04 +0000 UTC]

here it goes

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Devinital-TLK In reply to TLK-JDM [2014-10-09 05:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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CougarHearted [2014-10-08 17:14:43 +0000 UTC]

YUSH!!! I knew we'd get story time!!! *grabs bag of popcorn*

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Devinital-TLK In reply to CougarHearted [2014-10-09 05:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Yep! Its a bit short though sadly.

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