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Published: 2002-04-08 01:41:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 14
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Description I love you. I wish I knew a way to explain how I feel about you. Every time we kiss I want it to happen over and over again because it brings me so much joy. I have no trouble being myself around you, which kicks ass. I would hate to be different around you than I am around my friends. But since you are also my friend, and that's what you were first- it makes it all the more easily done. I love spending time with you, I love it when your arms are around me, I love it when we're sitting together or standing real close, I love talking to you, I love hugging you.. and I love kissing you. Now comes where people say I'm nuts for liking you so much. Shit to them, they don't have my feelings. They don't know the feeling I get when you say you love me, or the way I feel after you kiss me first, or even the feeling I get after you cutely bite my hand, they don't know the rush of energy I get when you touch me in any way, and they don't know how it feels to just hug you for the very reason of hugging you.
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-jesse- [2003-02-19 19:20:38 +0000 UTC]

It's funny... reading this now... after I know the boy this was written about is not longer yours. Hopefully you feel the same about your new boy!
You really are a great writer... no matter what you say. You write from the heart rather than to please an audience... I love that. Keep it up.

*jesse

PS-
This begins my slew of comments.

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reverend23 [2002-04-15 07:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Never be afraid that people won't like what you write. Trying to write "what people will like" is how mediocre crap is produced. This was cool, and if anyone says it lacks technique or whatever, then shit to them!



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wisekracker [2002-04-10 18:15:34 +0000 UTC]

"I have no trouble being myself around you, which kicks ass."
Your so cool, #2! You rock. This is really cool and made me feel all fuzzy when I read it, and it's not even about me! That's what makes a good poem. Great work!
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.:A severed foot is the ultimate stocking stuffer:.

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wildsoul [2002-04-10 16:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful way to say those things!
Happiness for you both!!!
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Doko ni datte hito wa tsungate iru

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1ofthe4 [2002-04-09 23:27:21 +0000 UTC]

well i got to read it and i have one thing to say....awwww! ok so really i have more than one...skizzimit is right. you could make this a poem pretty easily but i like just the way it is too

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shypoetgurl [2002-04-08 20:37:49 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWwww..! This is so adorable especially since i know both of you guys. And i don't think it's too sappy because well...I'm such a hopeless romantic, hee hee. As was said...as long as you feel this way, more power to ya!

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xcarebear413 [2002-04-08 19:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Thats good sally!!!!!welcome to deviant!

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hedda [2002-04-08 11:19:13 +0000 UTC]

I agree. Speaking from your heart and writing the feelings that you know are the best tools for writing. Keep at it.

I love how you mix a little sass with the sweet.... "kicks ass" and "shit to them"...hehe...it adds a nice mix and keeps it real.

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skizzimit [2002-04-08 01:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Heh, no matter the quality it's from the heart. Don't worry about your writing ability if you mean what you say. Mix up some words and add a few spaces and you could have a nifty poem

BTW, check out my recent sap poem...T'ain't no wrong in sappy, mushy feelings if it best decribes how you feel.

-Skizz

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