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Deep-Ponderer — Out of Breath
Published: 2005-07-23 02:50:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I've always held my feelings inside
Afraid of the emotions i try to hide.
The pressure of hate and lies surround me
I feel so desolate, i'll never be free.
Why do i run away from my fears
Why do i cry at the things that i hear?
I'm underwater, i can't breathe
The light is fading, i dont' want to leave!
I kick and scream but darkness falls
I'm leaving slowly, walking down firy halls.
It's all over, i believe i'm dead
As i lay underwater i think of all he said.
I faintly feel the touch of his hands
Lifting me up bringing me to land.
Then there's light again, i can see
He truly loves me, i'm allowed to believe.
I'm alive and happily wrapped in his arms
I can breathe, and i'm without harm.
I'd always held my feelings inside
AFraid of the emotions i wanted to hide.
But now as i am not longer out of breath
I never want to return to the place that i left.
Safe and secure, my life is rejoiced
My soul and my heart finally have a voice.
I'm not out of breath.
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Comments: 4

MntDewforBlood [2005-09-30 01:38:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem. Katrin... How do you do it?!

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sunsoar [2005-08-30 03:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice piece here. It is full of emotion.

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Deep-Ponderer [2005-07-23 06:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! lol. glad u liked it

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VortexDragon36 [2005-07-23 05:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I really enjoyed this. I'll put you in my journal next time I write, so you'll get more visitors to see your poems.

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