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Here it is, the remade version of one of my OC's [link]

After looking back to this drawings I decide they need to be redrawn, so propably O'll remade all them, starting with this one. Also, I'm writting his story in English, not like I did before.

"Centuries ago, DOBA was a young man, who was born free and lived a full life, in peace with the world and his brothers, until that day when the white men came to his homeland. First they seem to come in peace, but as time passed, they ended up showing their true faces. They were there moved only by their greed, looking for riches and destroying all what stood up on their ways. They ransacked his village, murdered many of his brothers, and enslaved the rest of them. He tried to fought, but it were useless, he was beaten, captured and to punish him for his rebeldy, they chained him up, and locked him inside an animal's cage. It was left there to die slowly, from hunger, thirsts and fatigue, while everyone watched him. At this point, his heart was full of rage, poisoned by the venom of hate, while his soul was getting consumed by the idea of perishing without being able to take his revenge. And so, when his last hour was at hand, he said what could be the weakest sound ever made, but filled with the biggest hater ever had, a whisper asking for the oportunity to punish those who made his life a living hell. Something heard him. It introduced itself as NUKPANA, it said it was a spirit, attending to his call, and that if he was willing to abandon all he was before, becoming its servant, it wouldl grant him the power and the chance to take his revenge. He accepted without even thinking.

And so it started. The spirits of the wild came to him, they transformed his body, made him stronger, made him faster, and those chains which kept him weak and vulnerable, fused to him, becoming his shield and sword. And so he was reborned, more powerful than anything his people has seen before, and with his new power, he took his vengeance. But he was not a man anymore, he made a deal and he gad to fulfil his part, but not as DOBA, not anymore, he now was CHAINMAILLE."

So, there you go, new name, better Bio (At least I think so)

For thos who don't speak any native-american lenguage, I choosed those names for their meaning

DOBA: In Navajo means "No war"

NUKPANA: In Hopi means "Evil"

And CHAINMAILLE is the original word for Chain Mail

Well, hope you like it, I'd may remake the other ones very soon.

Description
Here it is, the remade version of one of my OC's [link]

After looking back to this drawings I decide they need to be redrawn, so propably O'll remade all them, starting with this one. Also, I'm writting his story in English, not like I did before.

"Centuries ago, DOBA was a young man, who was born free and lived a full life, in peace with the world and his brothers, until that day when the white men came to his homeland. First they seem to come in peace, but as time passed, they ended up showing their true faces. They were there moved only by their greed, looking for riches and destroying all what stood up on their ways. They ransacked his village, murdered many of his brothers, and enslaved the rest of them. He tried to fought, but it were useless, he was beaten, captured and to punish him for his rebeldy, they chained him up, and locked him inside an animal's cage. It was left there to die slowly, from hunger, thirsts and fatigue, while everyone watched him. At this point, his heart was full of rage, poisoned by the venom of hate, while his soul was getting consumed by the idea of perishing without being able to take his revenge. And so, when his last hour was at hand, he said what could be the weakest sound ever made, but filled with the biggest hater ever had, a whisper asking for the oportunity to punish those who made his life a living hell. Something heard him. It introduced itself as NUKPANA, it said it was a spirit, attending to his call, and that if he was willing to abandon all he was before, becoming its servant, it wouldl grant him the power and the chance to take his revenge. He accepted without even thinking.

And so it started. The spirits of the wild came to him, they transformed his body, made him stronger, made him faster, and those chains which kept him weak and vulnerable, fused to him, becoming his shield and sword. And so he was reborned, more powerful than anything his people has seen before, and with his new power, he took his vengeance. But he was not a man anymore, he made a deal and he gad to fulfil his part, but not as DOBA, not anymore, he now was CHAINMAILLE."

So, there you go, new name, better Bio (At least I think so)

For thos who don't speak any native-american lenguage, I choosed those names for their meaning

DOBA: In Navajo means "No war"

NUKPANA: In Hopi means "Evil"

And CHAINMAILLE is the original word for Chain Mail

Well, hope you like it, I'd may remake the other ones very soon.