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DarkestBe4Dawn — Dawn Ch 1 page 1
Published: 2009-07-13 03:13:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 524; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 7
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Ok so here is what I spat out for a rough draft of Dawn for the first page.... I even outlined it so it (hopefully) won't be that bad!Let me know if it is a good opening page
I don't know when the next page will be submitted DX (soo busy!!!!!!)
Oh yeah and sorry about that lovely note on the side... but only to those who play XD
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Comments: 33
Sounds like a good opening to me ^^ I like Lucida's design too!
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Dammit!! i lost the game D: i can't believe it that you play it too!! it's pretty good tho for the opening page. i can't wait to see what happens next!!
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^_^ Yay!...
Oh and I just lost the ganme again...
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now i've lost the game XD
i think it's very good, but a bit clique, but then again, it's very well thought out ^^
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Ha ha yeah... I tend to go for cliques when I don'tknow what to do >.<
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DOH! I lost the game! DXX
Good first draft. Love the middle panel with her rushing to get ready. xP
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HA HA HA! Yes!! I have a large scale game victim pile up >:-D
Thank you!! That part was fun to draw ^_^ and easy ha ha!
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XDD You are so cruel...
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YOU MADE ME LOSE THE GAME!!!!!
...Don't worry, I forgive you
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MUWAHAHAHA!!! *lightning flashes in the background*
Ok that's good ^_^
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And, btw this looks like a good start
Forgot to mention that XD
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6:30 oh the dreaded time the alarm goes off~!
How come they just don't set their alarm earlier?
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it was on snooze...happens to me all the time... like today I was supposed to get up at 8am... i woke up at 9 instead
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Hey Thats pretty good, can't wait for the next one.
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